Comments | trish90: He pulls away, lips swollen but eyes hollow.

trish90

Jun 07, 2008 11:42

Title:( We do not hold hands. )

Comments 11

peppermintdrops June 7 2008, 11:36:06 UTC

Yes yes yes!
Wonderfully written, love it! :D

trish90 June 7 2008, 12:57:26 UTC

aw thanks!! :)

oio_jane June 7 2008, 13:04:03 UTC

loved it!!

trish90 June 7 2008, 13:16:06 UTC

so glad!! =)

i changed the ending a bit...

lightredemption June 7 2008, 13:24:28 UTC

aah, so good!

trish90 June 7 2008, 14:03:04 UTC

thank you :)

kimmy_77 June 7 2008, 17:14:53 UTC

That was wonderful! Great job! :D

trish90 June 8 2008, 08:52:47 UTC

Thanks guys!!