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karmic_fic October 22 2010, 02:57:53 UTC
ooooooo, i love how in the meld you kept all of the language inclusive (our, they, their) very VERY hot

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triskellion October 22 2010, 03:06:10 UTC
Oh good. i was rather fond of that effect. Meld sex is so fun.

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margarks October 24 2010, 22:03:52 UTC
I like the way it affects Jim, leaving him feeling needy and a little vulnerable. Spock's last words left me shivering pleasantly, too... "so that I may begin again." Heck, yeah! :)

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triskellion October 24 2010, 23:05:33 UTC
Someone from such abandonment as Jim has come from would likely latch onto the feeling of having someone "there". Course, the fact that it's someone as sexy as Spock doesn't hurt.

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ladyshadowphyre January 6 2011, 06:19:19 UTC
"would feared" should probably be "would fear". ~cannot put this story down~

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nekoii_desu September 17 2011, 13:46:49 UTC
Just where was Bones throughout all this again? hehehehehehe~

and it's so cool~ for once, smex isn't really 'hot' but more 'awesomely cool' I'm like in awe. I've never read it written this way. It's like all and one and together and oneness and unity and union. You don't know who's where and who's touching what because its resounding and everything is all at once and, reading it, i get that feeling. I think this is a really nicely done mind meld, written out in the best description yet. =D
Lovely lovely lovely-ly awesome!

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triskellion September 19 2011, 00:47:26 UTC
He politely stepped out. But it's subtle since they're so distracted.

This is how I think bond sex should be. And damn if it didn't turn out well. I'm glad you agree. This is one of my fav sequences ever.

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nekoii_desu September 26 2011, 19:04:20 UTC
one of my most favourites too. Because seriously, I've yet to read bond-sex so freaking awesome drool-worthy, but hot HOT in a whole extraterrestrial new way never experienced before~ You are the first ;) take credit till i find a better one (shall share if i do *w* )

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