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triskellion

Feathered Frenzy : Chapter 13

Oct 21, 2010 08:07

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Chapter 12

( Jim stayed on the Bridge another hour, until the crew had transitioned shifts. )

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margarks October 25 2010, 01:16:57 UTC

Hee, kinky! :) I do feel a little sorry for Uhura. I gather she probably didn't see that coming, though I don't think she really has the right to be angry. Hurt, yeah, but not angry. She did reject him after all. And he did need a mate or he'd die. I'm sure she'll get over it.

Pike's amusement amused me :) Sad to see this almost ending.

triskellion October 25 2010, 02:47:26 UTC

As an irrational human being she has every right to be angry, until reality settles in and she gets over it. She needs some time to sort it out.

Pike was fun to write. He's going to be hazing the boys over this for some time I'm sure. *grin*

It must end eventually. But I do intend to write a sequel someday.

nekoii_desu September 18 2011, 07:28:02 UTC

They should save at least 2 or 3 for themselves, y'know, for their children... or in case one get's dirty.... xD hehe~

I love Pike!
He has a very nice way of dropping the bomb :D And I know someone should be feeling sad for Uhura, I'm sorry that I'm not that someone.
LET IT BE KNOWN TO THE WORLD!!!! XD Their marriage cert should be printed on the intergalactic newspapers. Or as an auto pop-up for the auto-send packed data of news that every civilian and politician and starfleet associate receives daily. :D heheeee~~~

triskellion September 19 2011, 02:24:03 UTC

I suppose I could write a follow up where the knowledge of their marriage hits the tabloids and Earth goes crazy. Hmm, could be interesting.

nekoii_desu September 26 2011, 19:01:53 UTC

A lil ficlet/drabble like that wouldn't hurt ;)