He really didn't see it coming, chapter 3

Feb 04, 2008 19:07

Okay, for the few people who read this fic of mine, chapter 3 is out. I didn't want to post until I finished chapter 4 but I am really out of inspiration so it could take long until the next chap is done and I don't want to keep you waiting for too long. :) So here it is!
Feedback of any kind is appreciated! You like this fic? You think it sucks? ( Read more... )

ishida, nemu, 3, fiction

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snowzapped February 4 2008, 19:25:25 UTC
Gah!!! O__o

Bad Boy Quincy-sama is lose! I want the next chapter!!! Argh!!! O__O

And my favorite line of all time:

Somehow, calling her Kurotsuchi-san with her half-naked and sucking his dick felt extremely weird. LMAO

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trito_chan February 4 2008, 19:31:19 UTC
Thank you, I try to be funny. After all, this is romance / humor...:D

You got a peak of the next chapter so you know what happens, but I have to finish it. I don't want it to be of lesser quality than the previous three chapters. Hell, it has to be even better because that is where the actual smut part comes. LOL

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myojo_s_me February 4 2008, 19:51:19 UTC
XD
I liked the way you started with talking about quincy pride XD It's just soooo Ishida|D

Now I'm really interested in what Ishida plans~~~

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trito_chan February 4 2008, 19:59:59 UTC
Thank you! When that idea came to my head, I was like: I sooo have to use this, this is Ishida all the way! LOL
I'm glad you like it and Ishida has a few plans of his own now. XD

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femmephantom February 4 2008, 19:58:34 UTC
HA! Lovely work, Kris. I can't wait to read more, but take your time with the smexiness. :D

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trito_chan February 4 2008, 20:04:48 UTC
I will try to write more as soon as possible, but I don't want to hurry it and make it bad so maybe you'll have to wait a bit longer since I have run dry on ideas. I have the general idea of where the story will go :D but I have to work out the details in my head before writing it down.

By the way...I just love your icon. XD XD It won't suck itself. LMAO

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femmephantom February 4 2008, 21:44:16 UTC
I just love your icon.

I know! Isn't it just soooo Grimm?

*squee*

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naughty_gurrl February 5 2008, 07:10:04 UTC
I'm glad that he is taking over.

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trito_chan February 5 2008, 10:42:53 UTC
LOL
You know, I am glad he is taking over too. I bet once Ishida cuts loose he can get pretty wild. It's always the quiet ones, I say. :D

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senbonzakura77 February 6 2008, 01:47:37 UTC
LOL. Hilarious.. I love that first paragraph; it's precisely what Ishida would think! And I must say, I wonder what he's planning..

Excellent story! :D

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trito_chan February 7 2008, 16:19:25 UTC
Thank you very much! You will read what Ishida is planning, I do hope I will finish the next chapter soon. Thank you for reading!

And I love your icon, it's funnyyy!

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