The Anonymous Writing Feedback Meme

[trivialaffair]

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Since it’s been more than half a year since the last one.

Let’s keep this simple. As a writer, do you want to know what readers really think of your writing?

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Comments

[ionnesaysrawr]

ionnesaysrawr @ makeoutboys

[ravyn_ashling]

BUT I'M ALWAYS HONEST WITH YOU. D:

[ionnesaysrawr]

your fic is amazing. cigarette lighter lovesong is one of my favorite fics ever. ♥ i love your style, it's really beautiful along with being really clever and succinct. please don't ever stop writing. :)

[resha_ueda]

YOU IS ALWAYS AWESOME~~~ BOTH AS A WRITER AND AS A BETA
*SPARKLES*

[ionnesaysrawr]

I don't know if you pimped this out on your fic comm, but ajksdlf; I just found you here and I have to tell you that you are one of my favorite writers &hearts your style is so lovely, and often witty, and just. You'll also probably get this a lot, but Cigarette Lighter Lovesong will always be one of my favorite pieces of fanfiction ever. Please, never stop writing. *_* &hearts

[ionnesaysrawr]

I love you, really. Just. I can always count on you for my Kameda and Ueda needs, CLL will forever be one of my favorites. PLEASE never ever stop writing, you're amazing.

[ionnesaysrawr]

You are seriously one of the best writers in the JE fandom. I adore the way you write Jin/Ueda and -- really, Ueda and anyone. :D SERIOUSLY AWESOME.

[ionnesaysrawr]

Gosh, your writing is gorgeous ♥. But--sometimes you have a little problem with tenses. Most people probably don't notice them, but I'm terribly nitpicky. Just being honest :) ♥.

[ionnesaysrawr]

unf, yes, tenses and i don't get along very well. u_u but i'll work on it, fo sho. thank you for the honest feedback! :D

[ionnesaysrawr]

^ i am also retarded. i don't know why i had to go anonymous on that. :))

[ionnesaysrawr]

Your stuff is very fun to read, although I think you sometimes try too hard to be funny/witty, sometimes sacrificing the accuracy of characterization. You also have inconsistency with tenses that I find a bit distracting.

But looking past that, your writing is lovely, yes. I'd like to see you try writing longer fics though, because I believe that's how a writer's true style emerges. But maybe that's just me. *is shot*

[ionnesaysrawr]

ohnoes. D: do you have a particular fic in mind or are they my fics in general? D: also, yes, i apparently have a problem with tenses. *points at above comment* we don't get along very well. but i'll work on it! :D as for longer fics, CLL was pretty long. and it was exhausting to write. not really my thing. ):

thank you for the honest feedback! i'm going to try my hardest to improve~ :D