The Anonymous Writing Feedback Meme

[trivialaffair]

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Since it’s been more than half a year since the last one.

Let’s keep this simple. As a writer, do you want to know what readers really think of your writing?

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Comments

[symphonied]

symphonied/firelights @ minorheartbeat.

[xiahtic]

i wish you'd write more :( your writing's poetic, but it's not too heavy on the imagery, either - one of the things i love in fic, and you do it so well ♥

[symphonied]

me too :( and thank you! ♥

[mumbles]

really love your writing.
All the intricate details is love!

[symphonied]

thank you so much. :)

[freefallskyline]

navneet, i love your writing♥ i love how you include a bunch of little details, yet you don't bog the whole fic down with needless rambling. your writing is really beautiful.

is this SUPPOSED to be done anonymously

[symphonied]

sfklf viva T_T♥ YES IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE DONE ANON LOL. slkld flails. tysm.

[kurogoma]

i love your work. i don't see them as much these days but i always remember them. and because i got quite a few of them mem'ed i go back to re-read them on days i need a dose of good fics.

your stories have a very poetic, dreamy quality to them that i like. and i hope to see you get your muse back for your jaemin ghost story one day. ^___^

[symphonied]

i'm so glad. thank you. this comment makes me ridiculously happy. :)

[scylladakylla]

You write really gorgeous poetic prose, which I really envy because it always feels effortless from you but it's something I've never, ever managed to do well. And like some other people have said, the amount of detail in your writing is amazing. ♥

Also, clearly you need to write more often. And clearly you need to write SHINee fic. :|||

[symphonied]

thank you! ♥ ahahaha shinee. i will get there someday. XD

[jeauexe]

safkjas you need to write more, my friends. ♥

[jeauexe]

friend. that was supposed to not be plural. :/

[symphonied]

ahaha. i will try! ♥

[symphonied]

your older stuff had a huge amount of detail, to the point that it felt unnecessary and too thick, but i think you've definitely improved. your writing is so pretty, but not meaninglessly pretty, and i really do enjoy it. :) pay attention to your punctuation though, especially how you use semi-colons. and i think you could afford to use shorter sentences once in a while, since using too many run-ons makes them start to lose their impact.

[symphonied]

thank you so much! :) this is such a wonderful comment, sklfk it made me flail a little. ♥ concrit is such a hard thing to get sometimes.