I haven't read a lot of your writing, but from what I have it's the incredible clear mental images that I like the most. The shortness and density of your writing can be both positive and negative. The positive side I think is that it's rewarding for the reader to pay closer attention and draw out the meaning with some thought. But it can easily become too obscure, too fragmentary for the reader to understand or care.
I think it's important to remember that if you're going to post something, that you're writing it to be read by someone else who doesn't have setting and everything clear in their mind like you, the writer, does. Something that I've gradually learnt is that many great writers have a writing style that's clear and easy to follow but the meaning and ideas hidden within the text are profound.
I hope you write a lot more in future, and that we'll get to see a longer story from you. ♥
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The shortness and density of your writing can be both positive and negative. The positive side I think is that it's rewarding for the reader to pay closer attention and draw out the meaning with some thought. But it can easily become too obscure, too fragmentary for the reader to understand or care.
I think it's important to remember that if you're going to post something, that you're writing it to be read by someone else who doesn't have setting and everything clear in their mind like you, the writer, does. Something that I've gradually learnt is that many great writers have a writing style that's clear and easy to follow but the meaning and ideas hidden within the text are profound.
I hope you write a lot more in future, and that we'll get to see a longer story from you. ♥
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