I'm unfamiliar with your fandom, but popped over to your page and read "Dis-Orientation." Very well done, good voices external & internal, and except for one typo (groves should be grooves, at least in regards to windows), realistic place setting, good sketches of the surrounding cast. Captcha is KINGS FINDS
Hey - That's so nice of you to read a story that you're not even interested in. I appreciate the feedback! (And clearly I'm biased, but I thin you should give Supernatural a try!) (Also, I'll try to go back and fix the groves/grooves thing. Thanks for the heads up.)
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Captcha is KINGS FINDS
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(Also, I'll try to go back and fix the groves/grooves thing. Thanks for the heads up.)
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