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the camera man

Jul 29, 2009 00:45

Title: The Camera Man
Pairing: Ryo x Shige
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3000+
Notes: For fairy_illusions and our little fam exchange.
Summary: Ryo knows him as the camera man.

( Ryo knows him as the camera man. )

g: news, p: ryo x shige, c: ryo, g: kanjani8, c: shige

Comments 88

dagorwen July 29 2009, 05:53:32 UTC

first??? XDDDD
This is definitely lovely ^^
I like the simplicity of it I guess? I don't really know...it's midnight here, but I really like it!

trivialaffair July 31 2009, 03:51:21 UTC

LOL yes, first XP

Simplicity is what I was aiming for at least, so thank you, I'm glad you do :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD Thanks for reading, dear.

dagorwen July 31 2009, 16:57:03 UTC

w00t! XDD
You're welcome! ^^

epicwaters July 29 2009, 07:07:47 UTC

The conversation.. That is pretty scary. And I'm just a simple reader! ;D

The last paragraph is so cute ^^ I like that Shige devoted a camera only for him. Though it is a little creepy that he was taking pictures before it ever begun. lol creepy Shige... XDD and Ryo still isn't smooth so I guess it all works out in the end.

Thank you for sharing <33

trivialaffair July 31 2009, 03:53:04 UTC

If only that actually were my scariest conversation XDDDD

LOL creepy Shige may be one of my favorite kinds of Shige, really :D.

Thank you for reading!

bellemainec July 29 2009, 11:41:42 UTC

Ryo's not the only one with the tears welling. That was lovely. I loved the framing (oh how punny of me!) of it with the glimpses we get of Shige's feelings through the camera use. I love Ryo being oblivious and falling anyway. I love Kei-chan accidentally dropping Shige in it, and the end is lovely. well done!

trivialaffair July 31 2009, 03:55:11 UTC

Thank you so much (and yay puns XDDDD)! And thank you for reading :DDDD.

moonbyrd July 29 2009, 11:44:39 UTC

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This is so incredibly sweet! EVERYTHING about it, the whole band going out, Shige having a special camera for Ryo, Ryo being hesitant and a little bit scared and a lot longing. You are such an amazing writer. Humor, emotions, little gestures. You are wonderful.

trivialaffair July 31 2009, 03:56:12 UTC

why hello there :D

You are more wonderful. The end. thank you for reading :DDDDD

seimeinohana July 29 2009, 14:12:52 UTC

Ah, Triv shall I say this is my first RyoShige fic read in the last month? It's so incredibly ...you. It's a little bit endearing, a little bit humourous and a little bit thoughtful.

I think I am in love with Shige in this fic. The glimpses we see of Shige's feeling and his obsession of capturing Ryo and his apartment. &hearts

trivialaffair July 31 2009, 03:56:57 UTC

LOL, that's not too bad. I don't think I've read one for even longer XPPP.

lakdm your comment makes happy ::hugs:: Thanks for reading!