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friday nights in rendezvous

Oct 18, 2009 15:50

Title: Friday Nights in Rendezvous
Pairing: Ohno x Sho (Ohno x Nino, Ohno x Aiba, Ohno x Jun)
Rating: R
Word Count: 1800+
Notes: Host!Ohno AU. Just in case, I know that hosts aren’t prostitutes, but can Ohno help that he likes getting laid?
Summary: Moments in the life of an average host.

( He comes every Friday night, nearly five minutes after Rendezvous opens. )

p: ohno x sho, c: sho, c: ohno, g: arashi

Comments 68

toinkydoink October 19 2009, 00:34:13 UTC

*rises from the dead*

...nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh, you. you didn't even (partly!)dedicate this to me how dare you ask for a flaily comment after I've already flailed all over you on (limited!)texting. :P

But, no, seriously. stirfried_lies more or less summed the flail up, y'know. But since you're probably going to not let me get away with just that, here:

............YOU. THIS. JUST. OHNO. WHAT DID YOU DO TO OHNO OHMYGOD FIX IT, TRIV, FIX IIIIIIIIIIIIIIT (you're going to so write a sequel for this, you just know it. You know you waaaaant toooooo 8D 8D 8D) AND SHO OHMYGOD. SHO WITH THE EXPENSIVE SUIT AND THE WUNDERKIND-NESS AND HE GOES HOME AT TEN PAST NINE AND JUST ( ... )

trivialaffair October 19 2009, 00:37:55 UTC

MY CELL PHONE HATES ME SO MUCH IT JUST SENT ME A RANDOM PART OF YOUR EARLIER FLAIL. YOUR DISJOINTED TEXT FLAIL IS CONFUSING ME BUT I LOVE IT SO MUCH *_____*

AND LASKDMFALKSDFSADF YOU ALREADY KNOW THIS IS PRETTY MUCH YOUR FAULT. BUT IF I MAKE IT OFFICIAL, I THINK DI MAY HUNT ME DOWN D: THE THOUGHT SCARES ME.

ILUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.

speckled_writer October 19 2009, 01:38:56 UTC

I love it when you write.

This is goregous.
I love the Aiba part "I'm just here on a dare, lets get a room" XP
And the whole meloncholy of Sho and Nino just wanting to be with him.
And Jun who got Ohno into that line of work and now frets about it.
*loves on you*

trivialaffair October 26 2009, 00:25:55 UTC

lakdsmfadf ::loves on you back::

dw9lives October 19 2009, 04:56:49 UTC

i can't even remember the last time I read an arashi-only fic! but i read this one because you wrote it. :D i actually really loved it! Nino and Jun's parts were my favorite, love the DoS masters! haha.

trivialaffair October 26 2009, 00:27:17 UTC

Qlksmdfaawww that makes me feel happy. Thank you for reading, you ::lovelovelove::

nyw October 19 2009, 12:18:04 UTC

where everyone is gay! :D

trivialaffair October 26 2009, 00:28:15 UTC

LOL THAT WOULD BE WHAT YOU FOCUS ON XPPP

aikomidori October 19 2009, 13:08:29 UTC

I've been craving Ohno/Sho recently and this. This this this this this ;______;

I also love it that this is Ohno/Sho and Ohno/Nino and Ohno/Aiba and Ohno/Jun. I've been wanting a fic like this, as opposed to Ohno/Arashi. But I didn't think it would actually exist. But now it does. And I am happy. :D ♥ My Ohno bias is strong.

UGH I'D PICK OHNO TOO IF HE YAWNED BECAUSE YES WHEN HIS NOSE SCRUNCHES UP IT'S DAMN CUTE *envies Aiba*

PLZ TO BE WRITING MOAR OHNOARASHI FICZ :OOOOOO

trivialaffair October 26 2009, 00:29:25 UTC

I approve of your Ohno bias XDDDD Though I approve of any Arashi bias in general :D

OHNO'S YAWN IS SERIOUSLY THE CUTEST THING EVER *__*

LKMFADF I LIKE THEM SO MUCH I MIGHT AS WELL TRY LOL.

Thank you for reading~