tokyo lights

[trivialaffair]

Title: Tokyo Lights
Pairings: Hyukjae x Shige; Donghae x Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6200+
Note: For catskilt. Gem, I prostrate myself before you in apology. This monster of wtf-ery is absolutely pointless (see summary), and may require suspension of belief. I have no idea why I thought this would be a good idea :(
Summary: Hyukjae spends a week in

Comments

[nyw]

JUST SO YOU KNOW. I READ THIS AGAIN DESPITE HAVING READ IT TWO MILLION TIMES BY NOW. AND I STILL LOVE IT. ♥ ♥

(also spot for Gem if she wants)

[catskilt]

BITCH HOW DARE YOU BE FIRST

[trivialaffair]

LOL YOU'RE SO POSSESSIVE :P

[trivialaffair]

lololol THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR HOLDING MY HAND THROUGHOUT THIS WHOLE THING O_o

Part 1

[catskilt]

OH MY FUCKING GOD. HAVE I PROPOSED TO YOU? I HAVE, RIGHT? GOOD BECAUSE YOU'RE MINE FOREVER /IS POSSESSIVE

So I've actually thought about it before, what Hyuk/Shige would be like, but I never got further than the possible amount of failage. YOU HAVE SHOWN ME THE LIGHT OF HOW AMAZING HYUK/SHIGE IS AND I CAN'T EVEN BELIEVE IT. ;aslkj;ljk I am so seriously starry-eyed right now *________* and in future, shut up about me possibly hating your fic. I never will, okay. Even when you write me a non-existent pairing because damn a;sdlkj; WHEN YOU PUT MY FAVOURITE IN KPOP WITH MY FAVOURITE IN JPOP HOW CAN I HATE IT? Especially when it's in a realistic context like this, where they don't magically speak each other's language and it's not crack (I would probably have hated crack) and it ends in a believable manner.

Your humour throughout, I adore it. And will quote things at you obnoxiously because I loved so many lines in this and because I want to boost your ego right now.

Still, Donghae holds him and Hyukjae lets himThe little undercurrent

Part 2

[catskilt]

Eventually, after accosting an elderly gentleman and barking loudly in the middle of the street
Okay, so. Amid all the awesomeness of this fic, this is probably the line I love best because it's so entirely, absolutely, amazingly, what Hyukjae would do. So much so that I can picture him doing it and oh my dear god it's cracking me up so hard.

;asldkj;lkj the entirety of Shige and Hyukjae's interaction is so lovely in this. How they play charades, and try to guess at each other's fail English, and BREAST PUDDINGS LMAO HYUKJAE WOULD DRAW BREAST PUDDINGS FOR A CLEARER DESCRIPTION and ugh them going to Tokyo Tower together and getting squeezed by a thousand mooning couples. It's so adorable and I can picture everything and somehow, strangely, it totally works *___

Re: Part 2

[trivialaffair]

LOL YOU WOULD FOCUS ON THE HYUK/HAE LMAO. AND JUST. LAKMDSFALDF

WHY DO I WRITE (NON-EXISTENT) RARE PAIRS. WHY DON'T PEOPLE STOP ME.ALSDKMFALKDF T____T

YOU CAN NEVER DENY THAT I LOVE YOU. AT LEAST NOT ANYMORE.

AND I WILL MISS YOU, YOU WHORE. DON'T EVER DOUBT IT ::CLINGS FOREVER::

Re: Part 1

[trivialaffair]

i think i'm also supposed to be having your babies sat some pt in time ;D

::is yours forever:: i suppose :P

and of course i was addressing you :PPPPPPPPPP

[ayumwu]

I was here for the crack, but there was no crack in sight. :((((((

And then while I was reading I remembered how much you liked to put Shige in impossible situations, lol. :D

[trivialaffair]

...BUT WHY WOULD I WRITE CRACK WHEN I COULD WRITE STUPID NON-CRACK LIKE THIS? T____________________T

...YES, THAT TOO. LADKMFLAKDF MY LIFE. WHY DO I WRITE THESE THINGS.

[ayumwu]

LOL BECAUSE? IDK THE DINO!ARASHI WAS PRETTY CRACK, MAYBE YOU MEANT IT AS NON-CRACK?

XDDDDDD Because you secretly want a rendezvous like that with Shige/Sho/Eunhyuk/SJ/whatev rofl

[trivialaffair]

...yeah okay fine lmao. truth.

[girlearthless]

Oh this was lovely ♥____♥ I am usually indifferent to Shige but augh the way you wrote Hyuk and him together *_* I really loved how you pointed out all their similarities (holding back, dorking around, being wonderfully awkward) and how you brought Hyuk's feelings for Donghae in, too (and how Shige helped to do that). And all the Japan references XD Breast pudding cups, obvs., and Kyu's little comments cracked me up. I would love to see more Suju/JE crossovers done this well ;) *nudge*

[trivialaffair]

laskdfmalkdf then i'm glad because i clearly had no idea how to link them together lol. i had way too much fun making kyu's list, this is true lol.

...::ignores your nudge:: b/c this alone nearly killed me lololol

thank you for reading though, i seriously thought no one would T_T

[trivialaffair]

LMAO THIS IS WHAT YOU CALL VAGUELY INCOHERENT?LMAO.

BUT LOLOL THANK YOU I CAN GLAD YOU LOVE ME SO MUCH :DDDDDDDD

lmao i'm glad you ship this (pretty much non-existent) pairing :P

thank you for reading ::hugsssssssss::

[trivialaffair]

LOLOL OHHHH I SEE. THAT MAKES SOOOO MUCH MORE SENSE ;DDDDDD

ALSKDFMALSDKFMALSKDFMALDSKF ::IS GLOMPED AND GLOMPS BACK::

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD