stop looking at me, it's all too real

[trivialaffair]

Title: stop looking at me, it's all too real
Pairing: Hyukjae x Kyuhyun
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 8300+
Note: This was meant to be canon, but the premise is sort of out there. I suppose it could be considered as a slight AU: in which Kyuhyun sketches, and Hyukjae pursues.
Summary:

Comments

[ageru]

;_____; <3 I love this.

[trivialaffair]

aw bb, i'm so glad you liked it *_________*

::clings::

[catskilt]

YOU POSTED THIS AT LAST :DDDDDD

I don't remember if I told you what I felt about this when you sent me the google doc? Did I? My memory is horrible, please forgive me if I didn't ;___; (and somehow I have a bad feeling that I didn't)

Anyway! Coherent comment! The idea of Kyuhyun sketching never entered my mind before but you made it work in this fic. I like how he randomly sketches little things and people and nobody takes his art pieces seriously except Hyukjae, and then somehow it becomes this important message-carrying thing between them to the point that Kyuhyun overreacts because he perceives Hyukjae failing to understand something trivial and yet important at the same time.

Most of all I really like the banter between them and how comfortable they are together throughout, not in the bff way but in the we've been living together for ages and we're just comfortable way that I adore about KyuHyuk because that's just what they are, even in canon. Such understated friendship

[trivialaffair]

Haha tbh when you didn't reply I assumed you just didn't like it and were trying to be a nice friend and not tell me that to my face ;D

LOLOL you know? people tell me i put in a lot of details, but compared to you, my writing is as sparse as a desert. LOL SO THIS COMMENT AMUSES ME.

and adlfkmalsdkmadf how much time do you think i have, woman T_T

[dagorwen]

YAAAAYYY!!!! What an awesome story to read on my birthday!
This was awesome!
I loved how slow it seemed and subtle and how oblivious Kyuhyun is.
*hugs*

[trivialaffair]

I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY ONCE AGAIN :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

and aww, thanks! i'm glad you liked the pacing of Kyuhyun's fail ;D

::hugshugshugs::

[dagorwen]

THANK YOU!!!!! ^^
*hugs*

[trivialaffair]

<333333333

[trivialaffair]

YOU DO NOT FAIL BUT CHINA'S INTERNET CERTAINLY DOES T____T

[trivialaffair]

because you are very special person :P

[ununoriginal]

MWAHAHA~~ more k-pop fic from u - i'm going out but i will come back and read and comment! :D

[trivialaffair]

adskfmaldskfmasdlkf have fun being awesome in NYYYYYYY.

[ununoriginal]

(i do not have kyuhyuk icons so indiv ones of them will have to do :p)

i liked ur characterisation of kyu (lolz and ur persistent obsession with kyuhyun being over-clothed XD) - there is tat separateness, this sense of standing on the sidelines looking on with a kind of indulgence, tat makes him appear more mature than his hyungs, and i think u captured it here. not a pairing i've read... at all? but it was a refreshing change :)

[trivialaffair]

hahahahaha yay indiv icons ;D

and ADLFKM IT IS NOT OBSESSION. I AM JUST STAYING THE TRUTH, AS STUPID AS THAT TRUTH IS.

and aldfkmaldkf you are sweet and iluuuuu.