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all dolled up (with nowhere to go)

Oct 16, 2010 17:56

Title: all dolled up (with nowhere to go)
Pairing: Ryeowook x Yesung
Rating: R
Word Count: 1400+
Notes:Written ages ago on a whim and posted just because I can. Also, because Ryeowook is pretty and I am self-indulgent.
Summary: ( The first time Ryeowook cross-dresses, he realizes what Jongwoon wants. )

p: ryeowook x yesung, g: super junior, c: ryeowook, c: yesung

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jojibear October 16 2010, 22:51:50 UTC

I BAG SPACE. imma sleep now.

trivialaffair October 17 2010, 05:16:23 UTC

hahah good night!

jojibear October 17 2010, 15:58:50 UTC

>8( What is this - it's so depressing! (Wait, YeWook has always sort of seemed rather depressive...)

BRB SOBBING.

trivialaffair October 18 2010, 04:16:32 UTC

lkadmf is it really? i thought b/c they're so cute together, there would be tons and tons of fluff o_O

nyw October 17 2010, 01:35:50 UTC

lol woman you wrote this last semester.

trivialaffair October 17 2010, 05:16:05 UTC

shush woman. today i was trying to write fic and nothing turned out right, so i was like, to hell with it. i should at least post something T_T.

in other news, yay you're alive :D

thundersquall October 17 2010, 05:16:41 UTC

YOU WROTE YEWOOK I AM SCREAMING SO HARD SCREAMING SCREAMING SCREAMING BRB READING OH MY FUCKING GOD YOU FINALLY WROTE YEWOOK

thundersquall October 17 2010, 05:21:46 UTC

OH SHIT I NEED TO PICK UP THE PIECES OF MY HEART LYING ON THE FLOOR JFC /WAILING

trivialaffair October 18 2010, 03:41:59 UTC

[helps you with the pieces]

thundersquall October 17 2010, 05:35:04 UTC

Omg Kelly. /deep heaving breaths. Omg that last bit. Or at least the entire second half. WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT AT ALL, GUH. Complete punch to the heart. I mean the beginning was hilarious and I had an inkling that it's all unrequited on Ryeowook's part, what with Jongwoon basically only really looking at him when he's dressed as a girl (and who can blame him right, Ryeowook does make a fucking hot girl, lmao).

But the way you wrote it, omg it's beautiful and subtle but heartbreaking all at once. It’s painful, sofuckingpainful, and shit, he should’ve read the manual for this - there must be one, right? - should’ve asked Kyuhyun, should’ve done something to prepare him for the hole that’s gaping in his heart - omg I actually think I teared up a bit, even if it isn't as hard or as harsh as a lot of angst fics I've read. I'm not even sure why, beyond the fact that I'm a complete sap for YeWook, but... like I said, it's something in the way you write, the way you craft your sentences. It all starts out so subtle and builds up slow, and ( ... )

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baekhyun October 17 2010, 05:45:20 UTC

so heartbreaking yet so beautiful. i loved it <3

trivialaffair October 18 2010, 03:56:53 UTC

i'm so happy you did :) thank you so much for reading!

harunomasu October 17 2010, 07:12:13 UTC

I think that I've seen you before in JE fanfic fandom? Or not? Your icon looks familiar to me.

Anyway, this is so sad. I don't know why Jongwoon can't like Ryeowook as the way he is, not when he is cross-dressing as a girl. Jongwoon, you should look at Ryeowook properly!

trivialaffair October 18 2010, 04:01:58 UTC

ahahah yes. in terms of the internet, i started out in je fandom, but i've been an informal fan of kpop since young. the icon is massu's drawing of a rhino and i love it so XD.

and seriously, jongwoon should ;) thank you for reading and commenting!

harunomasu October 18 2010, 10:50:28 UTC

Ah, that's why your icon looks familiar to me. So it's Massu's drawing. I should have known ^^;;

You are welcome :)

trivialaffair October 20 2010, 02:58:28 UTC

Haha yup, Massu has special skills ;)