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Fic: No More Nightmares - Harry/Cedric - R

Mar 26, 2006 18:21

Challenge: #39. Madam Pomfrey insists that the champions stay the night in the hospital wing after the first task. Harry has a nightmare and cries out in his sleep. Cedric crawls into his bed to comfort him. Leads to some kissing...fondling...Harry realizing that he is gay.
Title: No more nightmares
Author: lilycat81
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Comments 39

tamlane March 27 2006, 02:01:08 UTC

Oh, CAT! I LOVED IT! So sweet and tender, and great use of the hurt/comfort theme, but BOY OH BOY. When you heat things up, you do it right, girl! I love Cedric's hesitation and the way Harry just kept going, so innocently unable to stop, and YES! Oh, and when Cedric flipped him on his back, I think I had a little spontaneous orgasm. :D And you rock at the initial seduction. Those light, tentative touches and both of them apologising, yet they just keep going. GAH! And now I'm going to be all over you to write more slash. (Or maybe I'll just be all over you period. ;D) ♥!

lilycat81 March 27 2006, 06:19:02 UTC

A spontaneous orgasm?! Ooh, that's high praise indeed, B! :D I'm so glad that you liked it because I angsted over this like a crazy woman.

Or maybe I'll just be all over you period. ;D

You know what I like. ;) ♥

ex_crystalle432 March 27 2006, 03:14:37 UTC

This... is beautiful. You completely nailed Harry as a fourteen-year-old experiencing these things for the first time, as well as Cedric being the older and possibly more experienced one who was trying to tell himself no. I totally felt the heat of their want for each other. ♥

lilycat81 March 27 2006, 06:22:16 UTC

Oh wow! Thanks so much for reading! I'm so glad that it came across that way, rather than being overly creepy, and I really appreciate your comment!

And your icon! *giggles*

sev1970 March 27 2006, 04:26:42 UTC

That was sweet - I liked the way you had Cedric being reluctant to do anything with Harry...and go Harry - his being the one to initiate what happened was fun to read.

lilycat81 March 27 2006, 06:25:14 UTC

and go Harry

Haha! Go Harry indeed! :D

I'm so glad that you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

bruisesonguitar March 27 2006, 05:00:37 UTC

*guuuh* The progression was perfect and believable. The two points of view flowed and were well communicated. I absolutely love how you approached this challenge.

*memories* :D

lilycat81 March 27 2006, 06:28:29 UTC

*memories*

*preens* I'm so flattered! I'm delighted that the progression worked for you - I was quite worried about that.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment! ♥

Q calanor March 27 2006, 09:45:32 UTC

this was wonderful!!!

well done

Re: Q lilycat81 March 27 2006, 17:58:56 UTC

Thanks so much!!! :D