Nothing

[niennah]

I thought I might post another one of my oldish fics here, to keep things moving an' all. It's kinda Warren/Katrina. At least, in my head it is. Hmm.

Anyway, there's no slash. That counts, right? ^_~

Title: Nothing
Author: Anna
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: No characters are mine.
Feedback: Yes please.
Summary: Warren remembers killing Katrina

Comments

[fan_tastic]

I like these bits:

Andrew thought it was a crime of passion. He thought that Warren, overcome by sudden grief at losing her, had, in a desperate attempt to keep her near him, accidentally killed her.

Andrew was wrong. Warren felt nothing but cold certainty that she would go to no one with her cries of attempted rape. No one would pin anything like that on him.

and

Get rid of her. It. Pronouns become difficult when the spirit departs. The thing on the stairs, get rid of it. Not so difficult, surely.

By the time he had laid out the plan, he had begun to feel frissons of excitement again.

Good work. =)

[niennah]

Thank you very much! I always like hearing what parts people really like, partly out of vanity, lol, but also it gives me a clearer picture of where in the fic I've succeeded in doing what I planned to do. And where there are things I haven't even noticed.

So thanks again. I'm glad you like. :)

[packmentality]

*happy sigh* I've always loved this fic. You're so good at getting inside Warren's head. This line is just priceless:

Just in time. He could hear the red shirts bickering on the stairs. He hoped they remembered the oreos.

Red shirts. Tehe. Once a geek, always a geek.

[niennah]

Tell me about it. ;)

Thanks, I'm so glad you like it. *g*