Fill: Or is It Just You? (2/3)
anonymous
June 9 2011, 06:13:11 UTC
Glancing back at Alan he was immediately distracted at how sweat and moisture from the pop can had dampened the hair at the back of his neck. It was dark and curling and Flynn's fingers twitched with the desire to touch
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Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)
anonymous
June 9 2011, 06:18:20 UTC
He slipped in the bathroom and slammed the door behind him. "Why you gotta complicate everything?" Flynn frowned down at the straining front of his jeans. He moaned in relief, as unzipped, finally getting his pants and underwear off
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Re: Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)severaJune 14 2011, 05:29:32 UTC
Wah. Already posted full version at the Tron Slash comm, so not bothering to log out.
Thank you! That's the fun of limited POV; your chosen character not always accurately aware of what's going on until its too late. Glad you liked the shower sex. I'm still pretty new to actually writing more explicit fic.
Re: Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)
anonymous
June 9 2011, 14:28:32 UTC
LOL! I love how Tron-like Alan is at the end. It's kind of like how Tron was with Yori in the deleted scene. Her rooms all pretty, and Yori has gone all sparkle!cape, and the words out of Tron's mouth was "How do we get to the I.O. tower?" XD
I'm guessing Alan's eyes without his glasses aren't that bad, since he managed to figure out just why Kevin wasn't getting any work done.
Re: Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)noctavalJune 9 2011, 15:01:00 UTC
Love it! "Why you gotta complicate everything?" Flynn frowned down at the straining front of his jeans. Hilarious! And I love the ending - Alan is srs bsns, man. :3
Re: Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)
anonymous
June 10 2011, 04:07:44 UTC
Man... When I saw this prompt on the kinkmeme, I thought to myself--"I think this is gonna make a gorgeous fic." Thanks for making this a real fic, better than what I had even imagined.
Re: Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)severaJune 14 2011, 05:45:47 UTC
writer de-anon btw
The thing about the prompt that got me which the OP probably didn't intend, was how concerned I was for the staff and costumers if the A/C was broke down. So, I had to include them (to also make sure they were shooed away for better Flynn/Alan privacy).
I'm sure Flynn's given his erection a talking-to about inappropriate behaviour on more than one occasion.
Re: Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)xandriJune 21 2011, 05:35:22 UTC
The thing about the prompt that got me which the OP probably didn't intend, was how concerned I was for the staff and costumers if the A/C was broke down. So, I had to include them (to also make sure they were shooed away for better Flynn/Alan privacy).
AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT. Not the OP, but seriously, great job.
Re: Fill: Or is It Just You? (3/3)allronix1July 22 2011, 11:31:19 UTC
*snerk*
Full confession: I'm totally willing to see Flynn as a case of "bi the way" (Translation for the non-Tropers: Someone who likes both, but doesn't make a huge deal about it nor hide it). Alan's a much harder sell, especially for any fic that doesn't make explicit what went on with Lora.
"Nah, be a man, sweat it out. Hey, think of it as like one those Indian sweat lodges. We'll be purifying ourselves and become more spiritually connected."
"And that'll help us make video games?"
Flynn flopped down on the couch. "Whatever works."
LOL. Oh, Great. I can actually HEAR the voices involved. Question for the fanbase - do you think Flynn was always a little interested in spirituality, or did a combination of getting drafted into a holy war and Jordan's untimely shove into the fridge car crash prompt it?
"Okay, dude, okay. Hey, where's your shirt?"
"Been playing strip poker with some super models, and we need our privacy." *giggling insanely* Between the Yaoi-fangirl prototypes and this...And then he goes back upstairs, and
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Thank you! That's the fun of limited POV; your chosen character not always accurately aware of what's going on until its too late. Glad you liked the shower sex. I'm still pretty new to actually writing more explicit fic.
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I'm guessing Alan's eyes without his glasses aren't that bad, since he managed to figure out just why Kevin wasn't getting any work done.
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I didn't even think about that when writing the end! But, yeah, it totally is just like Tron. Aw, the bit doesn't fall far from the logic tree.
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"Why you gotta complicate everything?" Flynn frowned down at the straining front of his jeans.
Hilarious! And I love the ending - Alan is srs bsns, man. :3
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Talking to their penises is one of those I've always assumed all men do. I may be wrong. And a part of me doesn't want to know if I am.
<3 Alan, always did prefer the more reliable, focused type myself. ;)
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Yessss. <3
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Thank you for commenting! I spent a lot of time just imagining it myself well before I ever put pen to paper.
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And also, Flynn talking to his erection. XD
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The thing about the prompt that got me which the OP probably didn't intend, was how concerned I was for the staff and costumers if the A/C was broke down. So, I had to include them (to also make sure they were shooed away for better Flynn/Alan privacy).
I'm sure Flynn's given his erection a talking-to about inappropriate behaviour on more than one occasion.
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AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT. Not the OP, but seriously, great job.
OH GOD, DARYL. It's still hilarious. XD
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Full confession: I'm totally willing to see Flynn as a case of "bi the way" (Translation for the non-Tropers: Someone who likes both, but doesn't make a huge deal about it nor hide it). Alan's a much harder sell, especially for any fic that doesn't make explicit what went on with Lora.
"Nah, be a man, sweat it out. Hey, think of it as like one those Indian sweat lodges. We'll be purifying ourselves and become more spiritually connected."
"And that'll help us make video games?"
Flynn flopped down on the couch. "Whatever works."
LOL. Oh, Great. I can actually HEAR the voices involved. Question for the fanbase - do you think Flynn was always a little interested in spirituality, or did a combination of getting drafted into a holy war and Jordan's untimely shove into the fridge car crash prompt it?
"Okay, dude, okay. Hey, where's your shirt?"
"Been playing strip poker with some super models, and we need our privacy."
*giggling insanely* Between the Yaoi-fangirl prototypes and this...And then he goes back upstairs, and ( ... )
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