fill: sinners and saints 1/1
anonymous
August 15 2011, 08:36:47 UTC
Advance warning: this contains heavy Christian allegory/themes. No offense was intended by the author in relation to the religion as a whole. I hope this is to your tastes, OP!
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The first thing you remember is singing. Like a choir: you tilt your heard to listen, concentration clouding your mind. There's something there that you can barely remember -- dominus mecum, benedicta tu in mulieribus, et benedictus --
et benedictus et benedictus et benedict-- et-- et--
You shudder into sleep once again. Your mind is at peace, with the sound of the Grid fading away above you. Born in darkness and ex nihilo you shall come. Bereaved of thought, only serenity
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Re: fill: sinners and saints 1/1mermaid88August 15 2011, 14:40:19 UTC
Whoa. (now I'm trying to figure out who it was; like, did Flynn literally make a program and name it ave Maria or is this one of the characters we know from canon.) Either way, fill is still pretty intense :)
Re: fill: sinners and saints 1/1
anonymous
August 16 2011, 20:20:25 UTC
OP here! I did not expect this to be filled, let alone so quickly. Completely different direction from what ideas popped up for me but this is beautiful - even if I am not a Christian myself. The themes you weaved into it are very fitting. Thanks alot!
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The first thing you remember is singing. Like a choir: you tilt your heard to listen, concentration clouding your mind. There's something there that you can barely remember -- dominus mecum, benedicta tu in mulieribus, et benedictus --
et benedictus
et benedictus
et benedict--
et--
et--
You shudder into sleep once again. Your mind is at peace, with the sound of the Grid fading away above you. Born in darkness and ex nihilo you shall come. Bereaved of thought, only serenity ( ... )
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(now I'm trying to figure out who it was; like, did Flynn literally make a program and name it ave Maria or is this one of the characters we know from canon.)
Either way, fill is still pretty intense
:)
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Completely different direction from what ideas popped up for me but this is beautiful - even if I am not a Christian myself. The themes you weaved into it are very fitting. Thanks alot!
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