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[tru_blonde89]

Ok guys, so for Public Speaking, we have to bring in a poem or narrative or well...pretty much anything we wrote. I am now debating between my personal narrative from last year, or this poem. Please give me your HONEST feedback...if it sucks, tell me it sucks; if you like it, tell me you like it. Please and thank you

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[brokenangel8989]

THATS GREAT I LOVE IT!!! i almost cried i'm sure its about you know who right? you know who doesn't talk to me anymore i think it might be becasue of the note i wrote him don't know?? i am so curious to know who he likes it bugs me even if i really don't have feelings for him anymore!!! but i can't find your question on my journal i looked everywhere what did you ask me do you remember??

ttyl

*Krystal*

[tru_blonde89]

hey, thanks for posting about this. I appreciate it. It was actually about this 21 year old that goes to Church with us...well, he used to. He and I haven't talked in awhile and I'm a little mad at him.
I think Sam might not realize how he's making you feel. Trust me, that's how I felt on the whole ride to Church last night. He just kept talking to me, and I was kinda mad at him because it's like he only talks to me when it's convient for him. He hardly talks to me at all when his friends are around him. And it really bothers me but I don't know how to tell him without him getting mad at me.
My question was: When is your birthday?
And my statement was: you're still almost 15 months older than me.=D

[brokenangel8989]

oh sorry my bad lol!!! ahhhh i'm done with sam i really am!!! so why did he miss chruch on sunday anyways he missed a really good service!!! I GOTTA GIVE YOU THAT NOTE I HAVE IT IN MY BAG THIS MORNING DON'T LET ME FORGET LOL!!! oh thanks for the thought about sam that explains alot of things i needed that.

*Krystal*

[tru_blonde89]

hey. Wow...
He missed Church on Sunday because he went to his friend's Conformation thing. ...so it was a fairly good excuse. He went Sunday night though...it was fun. You're right, he did miss a good service. Thanks for the note. I will reply and give it to you tomorrow.
I don't really know about Sam, he's confusing me alot so far this week.

[brokenangel8989]

yeah i really haven't tried to even talk to him i don't care as much as i use to whatever!! i missed my tech bus lol so i have been at tech for 4 hours. lol and i ended up missing a class at colchester its just one of thoses days i guess lol!! ttyl!

*Krystal*

hey

[babigirl444]

hey krystal whats up? hey what tech do u go to? probably btc right? im at essex wow it seems like forever we havent talked or anything. but hey u can post a comment in my journal or do whatever but we need to talk more girl. give me a holla in my journal sometime
britt

five stars!

[scarletrocker]

OMG! That was AWESOME!
The rhyme at the ending is a perfect conclusion and the idea of turning flowers (which are supposed to be beautiful) into gold is a brilliant metaphor. Laughter into tears is so sad! How did everyone react when you presented it? Don't let anyone vent on you (in case its about you)! Pfft they need to realize that you're nice enough to listen to them.
Why is the scent of freedom not free?

Re: five stars!

[tru_blonde89]

i have no idea...i don't know, it was just random. Like, with the war and everything, i guess. Like The Iraqis and the troops over there are paying their lives for freedom for the Iraqi people. I dunno, it was random, but I found an answer. lol. I'm glad you liked it. I actually didn't read it to my public speaking class, although i should have. i messed up horribly the thing i did read. So maybe next time, I'll just not worry about it and read it anyway...that'd be fun.

Re: five stars!

[tru_blonde89]

thank you!