Comments | truecoloured: one-shot。drowning。

truecoloured

one-shot。drowning。

Jul 20, 2010 20:27

drowning。| hyunjoong/kyujong。| pg-13。
kyujong's afraid of water like hyunjoong's afraid of sharks。
三1,085 words。

( kyujong hates swimming. he hates the feeling of not having steady ground under his feet. )

f: ss501, l: 1000——5000, t: one-shot, p: hyunjoong/kyujong, r: pg-13

Comments 31

renichifreak July 21 2010, 00:44:13 UTC

Oh holy Jesus, this is amazing...

n the end, with just a kiss, kyujong's taken by hyunjoong's current, and it's just to strong to fight. in the very end, he likes the weightlessness he feels when hyunjoong kisses him, lips hot against chilled flesh. in the end, he's lost in the ocean of depth in hyunjoong's eyes, in the moontlight sparkling against the waves of his heart. kyujong returns the kiss, sinking deeper.

in the middle of the night, when their both stripped bare and lying in each others arms, still fighting for breath after being unable to breath for the longest time, kyujong's fingering hyunjoong's sweatlaced hair when he has his epiphany.

as long as it's hyunjoong, he doesn't mind drowning. (because drowning like this is better than safety, and better than land.)

holy hell...

/stares in awe

truecoloured July 21 2010, 00:48:41 UTC

thank you! i seem to write the same thing over and over, don't i?

renichifreak July 21 2010, 00:58:56 UTC

everyone does...no worries~!

it's all amazing~!

truecoloured July 21 2010, 01:09:57 UTC

well, thank you. :)

mskatness July 21 2010, 00:44:47 UTC

....

I love you.

This is beautiful. I have no words. I'll flail at you on twitter.

truecoloured July 21 2010, 00:49:02 UTC

i love you too! :D

whisperingtunes July 21 2010, 00:58:44 UTC

Wow <3

This is wonderful.

I'm a silent reader mostly... but this is just too good. So I had to say something.

truecoloured July 21 2010, 01:21:39 UTC

i'm so grateful that you could comment then, thank you!

honeybliss July 21 2010, 01:13:38 UTC

Wow! I seem to saying this a lot these days after I have rediscovered LJ.

The last part is a killer :D
love is like water, kyujong decides, as hyunjoong sweeps him off his feet with a smile. he's drowning and he doesn't know what to do. how does he kick his feet, how does he keep from flailing? in the end he can't, he's just overwhelmed by wave after wave ( ... )

truecoloured July 21 2010, 01:32:03 UTC

my apologies, and thank you for quoting that because i caught an error that slipped out. i'll do my best to write more! :D

blindteddy July 21 2010, 01:23:41 UTC

how do you do it!? to be able to write this fast. i'm surprised!
this was, like all your other fics, beautiful and i loved it. ♥
i'm just so glad to find someone that really likes this otp! it's so rare but i love them. i really do.

thanks for writing and sharing and omg─ for liking this pairing! now i'm like─ REALLY happy.
i don't like ss501 that much, but i have a soft spot for both of them (for kyujong) and yeah─ this, this is happiness for me.

♥

truecoloured July 21 2010, 01:34:24 UTC

i do write other things, i swear. i just haven't posted anything here, lol. thanks for reading it nevertheless. it's not that fast, really. these are mostly old works in progress that i'm finally finishing up. i'm sure this little updating streak won't last too long.

♥