Dream Turned Fic!

Jul 28, 2003 16:52

I am letting everyone know ahead of time, this is probably the worst fan fiction you will ever read, since NOT only does it have the "oddest" pairing, but it was based on a dream. NOT only that but I believe it breaks all canon and even plausibility, and it's not written very well since it was based on a dream...

I call it:

Neville's Dilemma )

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skylark97 July 29 2003, 12:44:48 UTC
*blinks* Oh my god! Sirius/Neville! You are my hero. :)

It is a little rough in places, and I am kind of wondering how Neville first met Sirius, but I like the set up and I love the way Neville's characterized. (I also love the way you tortured Sirius and how it's done without Harry ever being informed. I could see Sirius deliberately keeping it from him and everyone else...) It makes a hell of a lot of sense that Neville keeps what he's seen to himself and that he even starts to doubt that he's seen it. And I can easily see him getting pissed off on someone else's behalf to the point where he'd taken on a group of Death Eaters by himself. I loved his resigned acceptance of what life throws at him in that last scene, too. If you ever feel like expanding on this, I'd love to read it. :)

^-^ *glomps*

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yakumae July 30 2003, 08:29:52 UTC
Oh thank you thank you! I have never written a fanfic before and was real concerned it was bad. Thanks! (Yeah, I don't know how they met eithor... it was based on a dream.) Perhaps I might continue it, or maybe this is the beginning of a great freindship (between me and slash fanfiction).

I've always thought Neville had a bit of a HERO in him. Especially more so since the latest book.

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