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Sep 04, 2010 22:41

Passion, Wit & Bravery, True Love & Duty
Obi-Wan Kenobi, Satine Kryze
summary: 'It had been seventeen years since Obi-Wan Kenobi’s death at the hands of his troopers on Utapau.

In striking coincidence, Ben Kellau’ie had been stationed on Kalevala for seventeen years(.)'
G / 1,195 words
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fic, star wars

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truthtruthlie September 13 2010, 08:27:32 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! I was fascinated by how much of their relationship was just based off snark and wit, and I'm glad that translated into the fic! ♥

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Obi-Wan's rage blew up a building? Neat! pronker September 12 2010, 18:12:46 UTC
"He remembered why he liked flying when he was younger, now that it was more business-like (and less suicidal).

He has not seen his own hair in seventeen years. It was starting to gray, he knew, little hairs here and there turning white. Age and constant stress (From both the Empire and his wife; they were in love but loved to test each other) did that to humans. He traded in his Jedi robes for fitted slacks and a cloak with padded shoulders- he had to admit he’d lost some muscle and gained some weight in his exile.

His facial tattoos weren’t cultural (not his culture, anyway), but rather tributes to his fallen family. All in yellow ink (for Quinlan), five (Siri, Qui-Gon, Boga, Padmé, Anakin) diamonds (Luminara, Barriss) dripping down his chin. He wore green lenses over his eyes as a final precaution.
Excellent take on an AU with them together, implicating that they had a prickly, strongly emotional union. I really liked the above quote, as it integrates visuals into your story and we get a sense of the passage of time and the ( ... )

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Re: Obi-Wan's rage blew up a building? Neat! truthtruthlie September 13 2010, 08:44:27 UTC
Thank you! Coming up with his tattoos was so much fun. (Did you know there's an entire Wookieepedia page dedicated to characters with tattoos?)

Again, thank you for reading! ♥

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