The Best Song I Have Ever Written

[tryin2makeit]

So what it is everybody.I haven't made a real post in a long time. So I was searching for topics, and while doing that I wrote a song. So for lack of a better post idea, I am going to post it. This song is amazing, haha. I have no title for it, but I feel it doesn't need one. As soon as you read all of the words, you will know exactly what I am

Comments

[castro4pres]

Kyle...that song is...

Hmmm

How can I put this

Even if my godly voice were to bless this song, it would still suck..

haha that's for cussin me out randomly in spruiell's lj...god im bored

physics sucks

Ight Buddy Man

[tryin2makeit]

Umm Jason your comment isn't even worth the time and effort for me to think of something to diss you back about. So I'm not even gonna do it to you this time.So think of it as an early Christmas present, or whatever you Cuban's celebrate. Peace.

p.s. Tell Mr. Lankford I said hey, you know when your mouth isn't full.

Hmmmm....

[spruiell]

Jason...random

Anyway, that song is pretty hot. I would listen to it. With the right producer (ie.-Alex Spruiell) it could be laced with a hot beat and be an amazing track. Haha. Dynamic duo bitches. That was a hot song though

Re: Hmmmm....

[am4z1ng]

I definitely don't think that's the best song you've ever written. The erotic theme, the lack of your usual flair--all in all it sounds like you watched some Jenna Jamison and then wrote a song. While it does have the usual talent you show in your songs--the same style of rhyme, I guess it just isn't my type of music. I'm more a fan of lyrics with a lot of meaning and a good message. This sounds to me more like a rap song--all about the sex. I gotta say, I prefer the other more romantic style better.

This one, however, I don't doubt would be popular. People like to hear that kind of stuff, so I wouldn't be surprised if that one was on the radio. As for osomething that could be easily put to melody and harmony, you got a sure bet right there.

As always, keep writing...

-Am4z

sup

[anonymous]

your lyrics suck dick fat ass

Re: sup

[castro4pres]

Kyle: I agree with niraj about your lyrics

Anonymous: wtf is that you little coward, at least sign your name if you're gonna give critcism, and no need to attach an insult for no reason.

Re: sup

[am4z1ng]

Livejournal should just get rid of the whole anonymous thing. Maybe certain pussies would grow some balls if they had to put their name on something instead of being able to hide behind the fact that no one knows who they are.

Re: sup

[tryin2makeit]

Sniff Sniff,whats that smell? ohhhh I smell pussy, you lil punk ass mothafucka. You coulda at least left your name, I mean Im a state away.I dont know why your lil pussy ass want's to start shit wit me. But your lil faggot ass is funnier than Dave Chapelle to me, so you do anonymous, and please keep it coming. All LiveJournal gangstas stand up. Are you standing yo? So if you read this comment, jus leave your name, I aint gonna do nothin to you. Cause I would fight ure mom if I wanted to fight a bitch.And it's a coincidence that my lyrics and your dad do the same thing. Tell that faggot to get off his knees. Haha what a waste of my time to even respond to that.

whoa

[anonymous]

kyle that songs just screams SEX. but in a good way. its well written and quite lovely in many ways.

i love/miss youuuuuu bye<33333

Re: whoa

[anonymous]

p.s. that was me...morgan