Crossover } Night Shades

[ts_soliloquy]

Word Count: 2190
Genre: Dark, Hurt/Comfort
Ships?: Mirage/Deadpool
Characters: Deadpool, Mirage
Rating: R for gore, language etc.
Spoilers: None!
Disclaimer: I do not own Marvel, The Incredibles or any related characters. This was written out of enjoyment of the series, and no profit is being made.
Notes: This is actually a remake of a fic I wrote

Comments

[kaiyabeck]

Holy shit, that was scary. D:

I love the artistry you used here-- the different fonts, the whitetexts, everything. It really brought home the feeling of a nightmare for me. Poor Deadpool.

And I love how everything quiets down once he wakes up. Mirage just has this presence that's so calming, and you can really feel it here. Like Deadpool, we're kind of searching for a safe place after witnessing the horrible visions in his brain, and Mirage totally provides that.

Amazing job, Tuna.

[ts_soliloquy]

Fffffshhhhh, thank you Kaiyaaaa! ♥

[captain2010]

OHMYGOD TUNA I SWEAR FOR A MINUTE I ALMOST THOUGHT THE CORINTHIAN WAS INVOLVED D8 Eyyyyes falsdjflj *flail*

I absolutely love the way you changed the text and that sentence with the letters all jumbled and the whited out word, fffff ♥ It seriously fits a nightmare so well. Also I envy your amazing details that make things real, like the TV guide channel.

Also, Cillian Murphy on a sea turtle. ♥

Um just one thing, "past by" I think should be "passed by"?

[ts_soliloquy]

DAMNIT I KNEW SOMETHING WAS WRONG WITH THAT SENTENCE XD

OH MAN HE WAS TOTALLY GONNA BE. I looked up his pages in The Doll's House for inspiration, and the fact that he was originally created to be a 'dark mirror' of humanity is sort of where I got the idea for the black tv screen.

Ffff, awww, thank youuuu, Amber Amber! ♥

[sparkism]

I have no idea how to write horror either so I can't really concrit anything. But I can say I think you did a really good job with this! I love fourth wall stuff, and it definitely added to the drama and everything here. ♥ Actually, once Deadpool woke up and was talking to Mirage, I totally was just waiting for something terrible to happen at the end and have there be a twist like HE WAS STILL IN THE NIGHTMARE OH NOES etc. Way to keep me in suspense the whole time, even if it was unintentional. xD

[ts_soliloquy]

Hee, thank you Sparkyyy! ♥♥

[lilacsofthedead]

*reads fic*
*read comments*

I KNEW YOU WERE DRAWING FROM SANDMAN THERE I KNEW IT <3 *favourite favourite comic series ever*

I love love the way you write Deadpool - and I'm so sorry for all the comment spam you must be getting from me ^^;; It's just occured to me that most of these fics were probably written a while ago from your perspective and you don't need a random hyperactive brit gushing about them so much...

Sorry ^^;;