Kingdom Hearts } Loophole, Loophole

Oct 01, 2010 21:29

Word Count: 1186
Genre: Comedy, Romance
Ships?: Kinda sorta Vexen/Larxene, implied Axel/Larxene, I-guess-if-you-want-it-to-be Xigbar/Larxene. Larxene's not a ho. She's a she-pimp. GET IT RIGHT.
Characters: Vexen, Larxene
→Cameos: Xigbar
→Mentions: Axel, Demyx, Zexion, Lexaeus
Rating: PG for sexual tension, I guess?
Spoilers: None!
Disclaimer: I do ( Read more... )

[ship] gen: het, [genre] humour, [rating] pg, # fan fic, [genre] romance, [fandom] video game: kingdom hearts, [project] un_love_you

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kaiyabeck October 2 2010, 01:40:33 UTC
Ohhh Tuna.

This hits all the right notes.

I have to say that Vexen/Larxene has always fascinated me (not in the least because I like to see the cranky old scientist seriously out of his element), and you've done a great job of giving them such fantastic chemistry while still keeping them in character.

I love your description of how Larxene's "perfume" is affecting him, and Xigbar's random interruptions are always welcome (although damn you, Xigbar-- I wanted to see how that would play out XD).

Another wonderful piece, Tuna. <3

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ts_soliloquy October 2 2010, 01:46:40 UTC
Hahahaha pffft, ♥ I think I would've liked to, too, but the idea of her being all "Xigbar~! ♥" came to me and I just couldn't resist, haha. xD

Thank you very muchly Kaiya ♥

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artof_war October 2 2010, 01:41:55 UTC
I gave a bewildered blink at the pairing, but as always, it's super fucking awesome. XD
And Xigbar, OH XIGBAR.
You. XD

My favorite line is probably:
He has to bring himself to stop, frowning emphatically, not wanting to be in range in case she decides to throw it. Women were horribly unpredictable creatures.
My Vexen-muse can only wrinkle his nose and agree. XD

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ts_soliloquy October 2 2010, 01:49:10 UTC
You never know what I'll pull out my hat next. Just when you think you got me all down pat, BAM IN YO FACE VEXEN/LARXENE.

Hahaha, yessss, thank you. ♥ I was just like, "OH VEXEN YOU SILLY MAN YOU." xD ♥

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scenotaphs October 2 2010, 11:06:28 UTC
Aww this was spiffy ;w; An odd pairing, yes, but hey, nothing like trying something new and untested.

I completely agree with Larxene being a she-pimp >8D Because honestly, being the only woman in a group of twelve men? Please, that's definitely what she is.

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ts_soliloquy October 18 2010, 17:56:20 UTC
SPIFFY IS WHAT WE AIM FOR
Bby, new and untested pairings are like my life. xD ♥

Totes, haha. She owns them allllll. She's the very best that no one ever was.

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littlecatlost October 2 2010, 22:43:27 UTC
That was great. I love it when odd pairings work out. I have to echo what kaiya said and tell ya that ya did wonderful creating chemistry and tension between those two without taking them out of character.

Pfft, and Xigbar has the most perfect timng! XD It's like he's got a built in radar for awkward moments and can't help locking on and making it EVEN MORE AWKWARD!! LOL!

And I caught the teeny hint of Xigbar/Larxene in there. I still think those two would be amazingly badass together. ♥♥

“Always wondered what it’d… I don’t think I’ve ever seen you turned on before,” the Freeshooter reports.

The ball of ice that Vexen hurls at him hits nothing but the corner of the doorframe and shatters, splinters twinkling as they rolled to the ground.

Oh, Xigbar, you are bad. XD

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Late reply is laaaate ts_soliloquy October 25 2010, 03:29:35 UTC
Haha, why thannnk you. ♥ Xigbar is the master of awesome awkwardness.

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ts_soliloquy October 25 2010, 03:32:44 UTC
ALVAYS VIT THE NEW PAIRINGS TUNA xD ♥

Ffft, why thank you. ♥ I love finding open spaces in canon to fit crazy interactions.

AWKWARDNESS = AWESOME :O

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