Comments | tseek_unique: "Between the Buried and Me"

tseek_unique

"Between the Buried and Me"

Feb 25, 2005 02:12

Title: Between the Buried and Me ( Read more... )

Comments 19

captsparrow4evr February 25 2005, 06:02:33 UTC

Okay, get ready for it-- SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! You wrote Jack/Will porn jus' for little ol' me!!! I feel so very, very blessed. Thank you, dear, this was just lovely. And Jonah and James are going to be having _their_ share of the wine! What a wonderful idea!!

Love the carrot throwing and the whole idea that both pirates are offended at the idea of carrots for breakfast. It's got such a nice, light-hearted tone. More, more, more!:)

(You know that's the problem with being such a good writer and giving such good story, right? Nobody's ever satisfied!;)

tseek_unique February 26 2005, 00:09:03 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I think your Jack/Will scenes are much better than mine, but it's fun experimenting. Now we must decide if Drunken Will really assaulted Foggy Jack or did Jack just hallucinate the whole thing. Laudanum was some pretty wicked stuff!

captsparrow4evr February 26 2005, 12:02:09 UTC

Hmmm. Thanks for complimenting my sex scenes. I do seem to be able to write them--now I just wish I had someone to _practice_ them with. Preferably someone with dark hair, dark eyes, about 5'9", maybe with a name that sounds like Donny Jepp. ;)

Now, this whole business with the hallucination. It never occurred to me but--well, aren't you the tricky little one? No matter how it turns out, I'll always know it really happened in my heart of hearts.;)

the_dala February 25 2005, 06:39:50 UTC

BWHAHA! That is so excellent.

tseek_unique February 26 2005, 00:11:45 UTC

Thank you! I just knew there was so much more trouble this gang of pirates could get into and so happy we're all a part of it! ;)

b_c_hawk February 25 2005, 08:47:08 UTC

*snerk*

I just love drunk!Will ^__^

*squees*

tseek_unique February 26 2005, 00:19:48 UTC

Somehow, I just suspected that a wine spiked with a Caribee aphrodisiac would work on Will. Not even Jack knew its potency. Whatever it is, we definitely need more JackSpice in our fics!

kaijawest February 25 2005, 11:18:11 UTC

Ah that was great! Especially the ending.

tseek_unique February 26 2005, 00:21:59 UTC

Thanks very much for commenting! Now to see if the JackSpice in the wine works on anyone else...

shrieking_ell February 26 2005, 21:56:18 UTC

Lovely bit of smut there! Will is such a cheap date!
but poor James. i hope he gets some nookie of his own soon!

shrieking_ell February 26 2005, 21:59:06 UTC

lost the more in that last sentence.i hope he gets some more (or possibly Jonah) nookie of his own soon!

tseek_unique February 27 2005, 02:26:50 UTC

Will just can't seem to hold his liquor, can he? He's been so pristine until now. And here comes James now, so happy, so pure in heart-- and there sits that nefarious drink in the kettle. Makes me think that something is going to happen. Thanks so much for commenting. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated.