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tseek_unique

The Final Nail

Sep 28, 2005 03:43

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captsparrow4evr September 28 2005, 14:38:23 UTC

Ratcheting up the tension nicely here, love. What the heck are those two crazy Sparrows up to anyway? Great work as always. Looking forward to more.

Um, just one thing: mortar and pestle. A pedestal is what one puts a maiden fair or a piece of artwork on. :) Picky, picky, picky, I know. 'M sorry, love.

tseek_unique September 28 2005, 15:41:27 UTC

Thanks for staying with me, luv. You're feedback is adored. And thanks for bringing the "pestle" thing to my attention- consider it noted and changed! Another chapter or two to come. Um, not to pimp myself but would you mind going here and leave some feedback for me? This is the final chapter of Between the Buried and Me. I did a tremendous amount of research for this and got very little feedback. If you hated it, tell me that, too. ;)