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The Seven Tongues of God

Apr 22, 2006 02:51

Author: Tseek_Unique ( Read more... )

Comments 5

captsparrow4evr April 22 2006, 00:23:43 UTC

Ooh, another chapter! Yes!!! *ahem*

The sense of foreboding in this is almost unbearable. From James' POV, this is very nicely done. Jack and Jonah together aboard a ship by themselves is like putting a lighted torch and a keg of gunpowder in the same place. The question isn't what is going to happen but when. I do so hope Jack gets the Pearl back. *Notice I am tactfully not mentioning Jack getting Will back.*

Looking forward to the next chapter!

tseek_unique April 22 2006, 00:56:54 UTC

Thanks for feeding my back! The second chapter is up, luv, so read away. Some twists and turns lie ahead, so I hope you enjoy. ;)

Vocabulary Police! anonymous April 23 2006, 00:38:43 UTC

Excellent story -- really makes you want to keep reading. So I shall go right on to Chapter 2!

FYI -- "naught" doesn't mean "not," it means "nothing," as in "all for naught" (all for nothing).

:)

Re: Vocabulary Police! tseek_unique April 23 2006, 01:05:47 UTC

Thanks for pointing this out to me-- I just got carried away- t'was all for naught! I shall correct accordingly. Thanks for bringing this to my attention.

Re: Vocabulary Police! anonymous April 23 2006, 22:59:57 UTC

Then my work here is done. ;)

But not my pleasure. Hope to read more soon!