"Together As One"

[tseek_unique]

Title: "Together As One" sequel to ""Breaking the Broken

Comments

[tseek_unique]

Thanks for taking time to comment. More surprises yet to come. I think Jonah Sparrow is going to liven things up considerably.

[viva_gloria]

I'm enjoying this more and more -- there's so much plot surrounding the characters, if you see what I mean, and it's something I do sometimes miss in fic! Plus, I like the way the focus is always changing. Looking forward to more ...

[tseek_unique]

Thank you! *hugs* I'm still reaching for that smoothness or flow in this fic. I'm going to work exra hard to give Jonah a lot of depth- if he is still alive that is. Feel feel to critique any of the stories. Again your comments are welcomed.

[unen2gemismasin]

Guh. I've followed this series of yours from the start, always hoping for a new chapter. And I wanted, so wanted to leave proper feedback. But each time I read another chapter my brain melts and I cannot form even an incoherent comment. This time I've managed to pull myself together enough to say that I lovelovelove this story. The characters! The angst! I was so morose and on the verge of tears when it seemed you had killed Jack off, but in the next part he was alive again and I was so happy and guh and then you bring in Jack's twin and James+Will chasing Jonah and everything is so deliciously angsty and intricated and guh. And I love it. Did I say I love it? I love it.
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[tseek_unique]

Thanks ever so much! I'm very glad you enjoy it. The feedback is the life! Watch for Ol' Jack to return soon. I'm sure there will be plenty of sparks flying between Jack and the commodore. *showers you with cookies*

[the_dala]

Eeeeeeek!

Loving this still :)

[tseek_unique]

Thanks for commenting. *worships your fics* The Jack/Jonah muse continues to speak loudly.