Well, now. That was a surprise. *g* The things people get up to in storms. Good thing they don't live in the 21st Century with power blackouts and such. Who knows what would happen. ;-)
Meant to add that I was really worried about Jonah. Thought this was going to be a very short fic. *g* And then look what he did! Can't get over it but totally delighted with it. LOL
Thank you very much. I think we should put out the lights on all our pirates for at least one story and see what develops! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I saw in your latest story that the good commodore might be stationed in Gibraltar with Admiral Stokes. Now, I've heard Admiral Stokes is a fine fellow and I think he just might bring James around. *wink*
As soon as I figure out what your evil, twisty little mind means by that I'll comment on it. *g* Actually, James' time in Gibraltar might pass by very quickly due to a chapter that needs to be of near-epic proportions. I'll see how it goes. Could end up with six parts of a five part story. *snerk*
Meanwhile, what kind of trouble are Jonah, Lizzy, Will and your James getting into? Hmmmm?
Stunning. A twist to rival your best. I don't think I breathed that whole time. Just... wow. The imagery, description, detail, plot... it's all absolutely thrilling.
HAHAHA!! Yes, I was absolutely up to no good. *hangs head* I could see this whole scene playing out before me when I wrote it, but had a bit of trouble capturing the intensity. I smoothed and reworked it, but decided not to beat it to death. I hope it worked. And, as always, thanks for reading! *hugs*
Tsk. Troublesome beastie. ...I know what you mean; when a scene forst hits me it'll often be in images, like blocking a scene for a play... and then to word it is just a drag, and ends up flattening it. I've learned to wait till the words start to hit me, and that's seemed to work out so far. But really, imho, you lost nothing in the telling here. Sometimes, when I'm reading something, I have to go past a phrase and think it through to myself, and say "oh, well this happened, and in the context of these characters and this setting... oh! Oh dear." But here it was all... right there. I rather forgot I was reading words, in fact.
Hope some of that made sense... figure it didn't... translated to English it's : "Good job you." O.o
Oooh, i love this ficcie madly. *clutches possesively* congrats, you're brilliant! keep writing, and make me a happy person. lovely twists and surprises in this chapter. can't wait for the next part.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for your comments! *bows* When I first created Jonah, I wasn't sure how he would be received, but all the feedback so far seems to indicate that readers find him infuriating and entertaining. I really appreciate your taking the time to read and comment. Let me know what works and what doesn't.
yes, jonah is just loverly, and this from someone who usually hates ocs. it takes a very talented individual to make me like ocs, and you have done this. also, your jack characterization is perfectly marvelous, and james is sooo sweet! oh, and i loved jonah throwing the thingy at elizabeth. for some reason, homicidal maniacs just turn me on. *hides in shame*
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Meanwhile, what kind of trouble are Jonah, Lizzy, Will and your James getting into? Hmmmm?
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.::waits for hands to stop shaking::.
Stunning. A twist to rival your best. I don't think I breathed that whole time. Just... wow. The imagery, description, detail, plot... it's all absolutely thrilling.
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Hope some of that made sense... figure it didn't... translated to English it's : "Good job you." O.o
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