"When Worlds Collide"

[tseek_unique]

Author: Tseek_Unique

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[meletor_et_al]

'Tis the end luvs. How it all turned out. Please let me know if you liked it or not. Historical reference included. *Takes a bow...thud*

...poo. .::frowns::.

But there will be a sequel... right? Right? Yanno, "And to tell you how happy I am that you're coming to our house in Barbados."? ...I mean, you can't write something like "I will not hesitate to draw my sword against Jonah if I see Jack’s recovery being threatened." and expect me to -not- wheedle for a sequel.

I love Jack's response to Jonah's returning the candy dish. And this line: Somehow the long, white shirt, loose-fitting trousers and purple shoulder cloth just didn’t seem to fit in Jack’s threadbare world. And all the rest of it. And... yeah. <3.

[tseek_unique]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. *hugs* Jack has quite a temper, doesn't he? Though he seems much more likely to think his way through things, he sometimes flares into Jonah-like anger. And of course, I'm planning a sequel. I've added the reference to the Egyptian book of the Dead, if you'd like to read it.

[captsparrow4evr]

'Tis the end luvs.
Oh, now, that _is_ balderdash! Of course there's more to come. Maybe just not under this title but you can't leave such an obvious cliff-hanger. If Jack and James are going to Barbados, there is absolutely no way your muse can resist prodding you with scenes, bit o' dialogue and the like. Undoubtedly, there will be more. I insist.;)

[tseek_unique]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Oh, the sequel to this never ending tale of madness and mayhem is in the planning stage. We can't just let either of these couples sail away and be happy, normal pirates! *snerk* I included a small come-uppance for Jonah at the end for you. He's been shot, squashed by a flowerpot and tarred, but he just keeps coming back for more. I added another historical reference if you'd care to read it. :)

[veronica_rich]

He's been shot, squashed by a flowerpot and tarred, but he just keeps coming back for more.

Sounds like when my sister used to sit on my back and pull my leg behind me, ordering, "Uncle! Say it!" at me.

Ah, siblings.

[tseek_unique]

Yes, indeed the secret language of siblings. Jack and his twin will have many more "touching" interactions in the future. I can just feel it. Thanks for commenting!

[the_dala]

SEQUEL!

Hee. That said, I loved this as a conclusion. Especially Jonah fretting about the zebra. You've done wonderful things with these characters, mate, and I can't wait to see what you've got planned for next time.

[tseek_unique]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I tried to expand on my historical references a bit the way you recommended and I think some readers find it interesting. I very much appreciate your feedback!

[sin_of_pride]

I certainly can't wait for the sequel, specially if it includes all the complicated relationships between the siblings, with Will and James in the middle of it all. Specially Will *grin*- I just can't get rid of the J/W bone. Beautiful job with this story, your characterization remains flawless.

[tseek_unique]

Thanks so much for following. I'm such a Will fan, too! In the midst of the cat-fight between brothers, he remains so pure. I'm sure things will remain very complicated-- my evil mind seems to work that way!

[restrainedchaos]

let's see; there've been pleadings beggings and demands made for a sequel. i think i'll take another tack:

you /know/ you wanna write more about your beautiful boys, and especially your magnificent OC. you can't deny that this story is like your own opium, calling to you and lingering in your veins...

ok, i'll beg - pleasepleaseplease write more! i've fallen in love with this! i know it'll be one of those series i come back to, even when the author hasn't written anything in weeks and months!

i've really loved this great introduction to your writing, and can't wait to get my hands on some more. happy writing! (because you know you want to...)

^_^
mel

[tseek_unique]

ROFL!! Thank you, thank you. The first chapter of the sequel is in the works. I'm so very glad you enjoyed. Feedback is the opium of the author, the hours we spend typing are well spent. Thanks for leaving so much.