[PART NINE] & Some News

[oresteia]

Okay, I'm a little new at this so sorry if I mess this up first go. Because it's been 5 months since the last round even though we haven't been busy. I figured I might as well earn my keep and try to get this place alive again...

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Eduardo/Mark - oral fixation

[anonymous]

Mark always has something in his mouth. Eduardo is always around him when it happens - he's got to see Mark sucking on that pen like he's some fucking porn star, right. And sometimes - Mark smiles up at him, quirks an eyebrow and Eduardo wants him so fucking bad he can't even.

and then sex. with mark absolutely worshipping eduardo's cock and getting off on it - OR OR OR eduardo sucking mark's cock and mark sucking on his fingers and getting off on it.

does this prompt make sense.

basically what i want is mark with an oral fixation to the max and eduardo being ABSOLUTELY OKAY with that.

Do They Tremble (1/4)

[anonymous]

It wasn't that Mark didn't care about personal hygiene; that had never been the issue. Mark liked to be freshly showered, he liked his teeth to be brushed, and he liked his hair to look like hair instead of Brillo Pad. It was just that, as per Mark's complex and (to lesser minds, at least) occasionally unjustifiable system of mental categorization, some things were necessities and others were luxuries. No one had ever died from having too many stains on his sweatpants.

Presumably, anyway.

Eduardo nodded along in agreement when Mark explained this to him via emphatic gestures and very small words, and then he said, with exaggerated enunciation, "You have not eaten in thirty-six hours."

Which was a firm and irrefutable argument, and Mark maybe felt sort of light-headed now.

"I need to get this program up the week before classes start," he said anyway. He'd had this conversation so many times, so many fucking times, and why was it that no one ever listened to him around here? "It's very important, Wardo, there's a limited window here

Do They Tremble (2/4)

[anonymous]

A warm hand caught his jaw. He stopped mid-sentence in shock at the jolt of unexpected contact, blinking hard to clear his blurring world. Eduardo held his face still, fingertips pressing into Mark's skin gingerly as he crouched before him.

"Mark," he said. "I will feed this to you. Is that what you want? Because I will do that for you."

Mark dragged his teeth over his bottom lip, tonguing at it nervously and frowning. "Has anyone ever told you you sound uncomfortably sincere?" he asked. His chin knocked into Eduardo's palm on every word.

"I'm sincere," Eduardo assured him. "I'm very sincere. Just say the word."

It had been too long since Mark had slept, too long since he'd eaten, his head too light for his shoulders now, code scrolling past each time he closed his eyes. There was no part of this exchange that did not leave him vaguely bewildered, and he couldn't think to work it out. Did Eduardo want to feed him? That probably wasn't normal, but it sounded appealing, almost. He could keep typing, and if he could keep typing,

Do They Tremble (3/4)

[anonymous]

"Watch the sandwich," said Eduardo, his voice cracking. Mark rolled his eyes and nudged napkin with his knee, ignoring Eduardo's grumble of disapproval. It was Mark's room anyway, after all.

Eduardo's eye went wide when Mark straddled him, his ass dragging over Eduardo's cock through the fabric of their pants. "Oh, shit," he said, hands soaring up to rest on Mark's hips. "Oh god, are you-Mark. Mark," he repeated, a bit frantically, "you didn't finish your dinner

Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

He kept licking even when Eduardo's hips twitched away from the pressure of his ass against them, kept at it until Eduardo sat up and said, "I wanna-" And then he flipped Mark over, settled him back on his elbows, and shoved his hand into the waistband of his pants. Mark swore under his breath and strained up into the touch

OP!

[rumpledlinen]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, this is fantastic! :D

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[slasher48]

This is so fucking hot. Not even just porn hot (which oh my god it IS), but like, very intimate and realistic and it feels like it could totally have gone down.

(Of course, in my head this means it's AU and no bad shit ever happens, nope...)

I love the sandwich-feeding and I love the thumb-sucking and I love the grinding (holy hell, the GRINDING) and I love the friendship underlying their every move and your dialogue is perfect and--

:pauses to catch breath:

--I just LOVE this. It's so fucking well done. ♥

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

I loved this so much!

Your characterization is flawless.

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

that was perfectly hot and in character! great job.

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[jasmasson]

<3

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

I just wanted to tell you that you have become one of my favorite TSN writers. I love the ways you explore their dynamic and your characterization is always spot-on.

♥

[anonymous]

That is so incredibly sweet that I have no idea how to respond other than to just say, you know, thank you so, so much for that compliment! That means a lot to me.

Writer Here!

[anonymous]

Thank you all so much for your comments! I would respond to all six of you but I don't want to spam any trackers or people using flat view. So I'll say here that I'm so happy you guys liked it, and if anybody wants to read it elsewhere, it's been reposted to my journal and AO3.