Re: Fill: The Before Made Up Of Delusions (3/4, BUT THAT'S NOT ALL FOLKS -- SEQUEL WITH PORNS)takethewordsApril 7 2011, 04:40:43 UTC
UGHHHH BB YOU ARE KILLING ME. These stupid boys! Mark just wants his bff back, and to maybe touch his cock every once in a while, and Eduardo is such a little brat but he still probably wants his cock touched. JUST TOUCH COCKS ALREADY. lol
But ugh Mark, I love his "apology" and how sad he is that it doesn't work.
Re: Fill: The Before Made Up Of Delusions (3/4, BUT THAT'S NOT ALL FOLKS -- SEQUEL WITH PORNS)slasher48April 7 2011, 05:57:43 UTC
ALL THE DEATH WILL BE WORTH IT THOUGH, LOVE OF MY LIFE. Mark does want his Wardo back and Wardo is a brat (but justifiably so), and YES THEY BOTH WANT THE TOUCHING OF COCKS AND WILL EVENTUALLY GET IT, AS YOU KNOW. ;)
Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad you liked Mark's apology. Generally logic and apologies don't work together well, especially in Mark's case, but I did manage, I think, to get them to sort of mesh. I think the fact that Mark did it for Eduardo to feel better, not expecting any gain of his own, gave it an extra punch, too. So Eduardo thought about it rather than dismissing it. :)
THANK YOU KITTY KAT, I FEEL THE SAME ABOUT YOU! :MUAH!: ♥
Fill: The Before Made Up Of Delusions (4/4 -- END OF FIRST PART AND NSFW-ISH)slasher48April 13 2011, 07:45:56 UTC
That’d been the beginning of a long and stiff, awkward but getting less so, scary at times and almost too easy at others, reconciliation. Eduardo had found himself on the other end of his usual insistent vying for Mark’s attention, humoring Mark when he could stand him and ignoring him when he couldn’t, and it had been refreshing enough - startling enough - to divert his focus from their friendship, as such. He had started noticing things about Mark himself that he (swore he) hadn’t before, too intent on how Mark reacted to him rather than life in general, especially during all the otherwise repetitive moments they spent eating dinner at various places around Palo Alto
( ... )
Re: Fill: The Before Made Up Of Delusions (4/4 -- END OF FIRST PART AND NSFW-ISH)slasher48April 13 2011, 16:36:16 UTC
:giggles: I'm glad you're so excited!
(:laughs even harder: You have brilliant timing, darling, because I actually just finished the entire fill and am planning on posting the next part soon -- not today, because algebra -- but soon.) ♥
Re: Fill: The Before Made Up Of Delusions (4/4 -- END OF FIRST PART AND NSFW-ISH)takethewordsApril 15 2011, 05:07:27 UTC
BB THIS IS AMAZING AND I JUST CAN'T GET OVER IT OKAY. Ugh Eduardo thinking about Mark's hands, and his hair and just Mark Mark Mark, THE PORN IS GONNA BE SO HOT AND I KNOW IT.
And I have not forgotten about my fill, darling, but I haven't been feeling well and the words have not been coming but I'm going to try to finish it this weekend. I'VE BEEN THE WORST LITTLE WIFE EVER, I'M SORRY <3333
Re: Fill: The Before Made Up Of Delusions (4/4 -- END OF FIRST PART AND NSFW-ISH)slasher48April 24 2011, 01:38:05 UTC
:DDDDD I'M GLAD BECAUSE IT IS ALL YOURS BB. Yes, he is, he's practically ~drooling over those hands, and wishing he could pet Mark on his hair. ALL THE MARK IN THE WORLD IS WARDO'S WET DREAM. AND YES, UM, IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF, IT VERY MUCH WILL BE.
It's fine, fine, fine, my darling wife. If you don't feel well I will feed you chicken soup and pet your sweaty hair while you blow all the gunk out of your nose and we watch old reruns on TV, and then once all that's done, you can write. :)
PLEASE DO FINISH IT. I AM SO EXCITED FOR IT SWEETS!
♥♥♥
(I think I'm gonna try and post some more tonight.)
Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (1/?) {Moving into NSFW} slasher48April 24 2011, 13:11:16 UTC
That was before. Before, Eduardo realizes now, was made up of delusions and half-lies to himself, because all Mark’s doing is checking his fucking e-mail, fingertips pressing all the right buttons on his phone, not even looking up as he scoffs at Eduardo’s questions about the seriousness of what might be in his inbox, but Eduardo is losing it. His fingers. Just, the way they move; and he must not be as good as he thought at being discreet about his frustration, because the fourth time he shifts on the sofa, Mark finally does look at him, fond exasperation (his default expression half the time around Eduardo) on his face.
“You make the most noise watching a movie of probably anyone I’ve ever met, Wardo. Can you just chill for a second so I can reply to this last one, or is my attention really always your premier need?”
“C’mon, Mark. You’ve got to be forgetting about Dustin. He went on a dino rampage over Jurassic Park three times
( ... )
Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (2/?) {NSFW -- THE SEXY HAS ARRIVED!}slasher48April 24 2011, 13:26:35 UTC
Maybe it crushes Mark’s hands a little, all that weight pressed back on them, or maybe he’s finally realized that his fingers have literally nowhere else to go now they’ve hit the edge of his slacks, but suddenly Mark is fidgeting almost worse than Eduardo was, and just turning enough to glance at the DVD menu, Eduardo can see a puffy red lip being worried to death by straight white teeth in his periphery.
Something painful shifts in his chest and all he wants is to kiss Mark for a second, just lip at the flesh held by his teeth until it falls away into Eduardo’s own mouth, soothe the harsh treatment with his tongue (or make it harsher: and Eduardo absolutely does not shiver at that thought).
But then Mark’s eyes flick up far enough for him to note that Eduardo can see him, and Eduardo sees the future before it happens, just managing to snatch Mark’s hands away from his waistband and bring them around his middle before Mark can wriggle away from this position he put them in and stop this. Mark’s chest smushes up against his back
( ... )
Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (3/?) {NSFW}slasher48April 24 2011, 13:37:18 UTC
And Mark surprises him when he nods, tongue moistening his lips for a moment, and then slips his hand down a little further, until the soft ends of his fingers are wisping over Eduardo’s balls: making Eduardo’s toes curl in his socks where his feet are, one too close to Mark’s calf on the sofa and the other rubbing over the floor near Mark’s ankle as too many sensations wash over him for his leg to keep still, maybe even slipping over the top of Mark’s foot as the caresses intensify.
Mark makes a soft little noise, of curiosity - like the ones he makes when a new app developer actually inspires some interest in him - and Eduardo actually arches up from where their bodies are melding, his own choked off moan much louder when Mark’s hand closes a little tighter in response. His thigh might be cramping a little where it’s crushed into the back of the sofa and his calf may have just tensed enough to hurt, but he wouldn’t trade Mark’s hand on him for fucking anything.
Ugh, and just that reminder, just remembering these are Mark’s hands
( ... )
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But ugh Mark, I love his "apology" and how sad he is that it doesn't work.
OH MY WIFE, YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL CATCH INDEED! ♥ ♥
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Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad you liked Mark's apology. Generally logic and apologies don't work together well, especially in Mark's case, but I did manage, I think, to get them to sort of mesh. I think the fact that Mark did it for Eduardo to feel better, not expecting any gain of his own, gave it an extra punch, too. So Eduardo thought about it rather than dismissing it. :)
THANK YOU KITTY KAT, I FEEL THE SAME ABOUT YOU! :MUAH!: ♥
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(Hopefully there will be one because if not, you're nothing but a teasing tease who tease!)
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(:laughs even harder: You have brilliant timing, darling, because I actually just finished the entire fill and am planning on posting the next part soon -- not today, because algebra -- but soon.) ♥
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And I have not forgotten about my fill, darling, but I haven't been feeling well and the words have not been coming but I'm going to try to finish it this weekend. I'VE BEEN THE WORST LITTLE WIFE EVER, I'M SORRY <3333
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It's fine, fine, fine, my darling wife. If you don't feel well I will feed you chicken soup and pet your sweaty hair while you blow all the gunk out of your nose and we watch old reruns on TV, and then once all that's done, you can write. :)
PLEASE DO FINISH IT. I AM SO EXCITED FOR IT SWEETS!
♥♥♥
(I think I'm gonna try and post some more tonight.)
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love this!!
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THANK YOU! ♥
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“You make the most noise watching a movie of probably anyone I’ve ever met, Wardo. Can you just chill for a second so I can reply to this last one, or is my attention really always your premier need?”
“C’mon, Mark. You’ve got to be forgetting about Dustin. He went on a dino rampage over Jurassic Park three times ( ... )
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Something painful shifts in his chest and all he wants is to kiss Mark for a second, just lip at the flesh held by his teeth until it falls away into Eduardo’s own mouth, soothe the harsh treatment with his tongue (or make it harsher: and Eduardo absolutely does not shiver at that thought).
But then Mark’s eyes flick up far enough for him to note that Eduardo can see him, and Eduardo sees the future before it happens, just managing to snatch Mark’s hands away from his waistband and bring them around his middle before Mark can wriggle away from this position he put them in and stop this. Mark’s chest smushes up against his back ( ... )
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Mark makes a soft little noise, of curiosity - like the ones he makes when a new app developer actually inspires some interest in him - and Eduardo actually arches up from where their bodies are melding, his own choked off moan much louder when Mark’s hand closes a little tighter in response. His thigh might be cramping a little where it’s crushed into the back of the sofa and his calf may have just tensed enough to hurt, but he wouldn’t trade Mark’s hand on him for fucking anything.
Ugh, and just that reminder, just remembering these are Mark’s hands ( ... )
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[INSERT INCOHERENT NOISES HERE]
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THANK YOU. ♥
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