FILL: Center of the Sun 1b/? — WARNING: CONTAINS POTENTIALLY TRIGGERING MATERIAL
anonymous
February 28 2011, 07:04:58 UTC
WARNING: CONTAINS GRAPHIC DEPICTION OF SEXUAL ASSAULT
Bitch, he calls her, and it’s not like she’s never heard that before. Uptight rich bitch, think you’re too good for everybody else. She doesn’t recognize the man’s voice, so it must be someone she doesn’t know, but it sounds like he hates her anyway. Feel this? I’ll cut your whore throat with it. Cut out your eyes and slit your whore throat if you don’t shut up.
Keep your eyes closed, bitch, and she does. She feels him unzip her hoodie, yank it off her shoulders. Take your shirt off. She does.
She feels his fingers on the zipper of her cargo pants, and she jerks away without thinking about it. A nebula of pain explodes on her cheek-he’s hit her. Stay still, bitch. He pulls them down, pulls her underwear down. She didn’t wear a bra today, and she’s barefoot, sandals kicked wherever they fell when she came back from lunch. She’s completely naked. Mark crosses her arms over her chest and he pulls them away, hard, hurting her
( ... )
FILL: Center of the Sun 1c/? — WARNING: CONTAINS POTENTIALLY TRIGGERING MATERIAL
anonymous
February 28 2011, 07:06:26 UTC
[Warning: contains discussion of the aftermath of a sexual assault]
Mark leaves her car in front of the Stanford Hospital emergency room with the keys inside. She honestly don’t care what happens to it; it’s not like she can’t afford another one. On the drive over, she planned out what she needs to say, and she rehearses it to herself as she walks up to the reception desk. I have been sexually assaulted and I need to see a doctor. But when the nurse looks up at her and says, “Can I help you?” Mark’s mouth opens and then freezes. She repeats her sentence to herself but her jaw and tongue won’t work to say it and her lungs won’t give her the air for it
( ... )
Re: FILL: Center of the Sun 1c/? — WARNING: CONTAINS POTENTIALLY TRIGGERING MATERIAL
anonymous
February 28 2011, 10:10:25 UTC
I hope you write more, this is already shaping up amazingly and you are doing an excellent job balancing the emotions. It hurts and is so sad and I want to see how Mark handles it all.
Re: FILL: Center of the Sun 1c/? — WARNING: CONTAINS POTENTIALLY TRIGGERING MATERIAL
anonymous
March 15 2011, 20:14:27 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad this is working for you, especially the emotional aspects. I am trying to update as regularly as possible, although this story is a little exhausting to write so it's going more slowly than I would like. It's going, though!
Re: FILL: Center of the Sun 1c/? — WARNING: CONTAINS POTENTIALLY TRIGGERING MATERIAL
anonymous
March 1 2011, 04:04:27 UTC
For what it's worth, I think you're doing an excellent job with this story, both on the level of writing/story craft and in treating the issue respectfully. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Re: [GEN] girl!Mark
anonymous
February 28 2011, 07:58:36 UTC
I'm not sure either. There has been a strange influx of girl!AUs recently, and while most of them are harmless, I'm not entirely sure I understand why Mark has to be a girl to be sexually assaulted - in fact, I'm actually a little offended by the notion that girl!Mark is somehow easier/better as a victim of an assault.
Re: [GEN] girl!Mark
anonymous
February 28 2011, 08:08:21 UTC
This, so much. I try to ignore the prompts that I don't like, because I can and should just ignore them, but this one makes me so uncomfortable. To genderswap a character for the sole purpose of having them sexually assaulted is problematic. :/
Re: [GEN] girl!Mark
anonymous
February 28 2011, 08:56:40 UTC
Precisely. I mean, I'm not a dick, or looking for a fight because I dislike something, so I know how to scroll - but this prompt, I cannot even begin to describe all the ways it makes me feel uncomfortable and offended. It is so far beyond a kink, or a pairing, simply being unappealing to me.
Raging Dustin and Chris pls. And also Eduardo.
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Bitch, he calls her, and it’s not like she’s never heard that before. Uptight rich bitch, think you’re too good for everybody else. She doesn’t recognize the man’s voice, so it must be someone she doesn’t know, but it sounds like he hates her anyway. Feel this? I’ll cut your whore throat with it. Cut out your eyes and slit your whore throat if you don’t shut up.
Keep your eyes closed, bitch, and she does. She feels him unzip her hoodie, yank it off her shoulders. Take your shirt off. She does.
She feels his fingers on the zipper of her cargo pants, and she jerks away without thinking about it. A nebula of pain explodes on her cheek-he’s hit her. Stay still, bitch. He pulls them down, pulls her underwear down. She didn’t wear a bra today, and she’s barefoot, sandals kicked wherever they fell when she came back from lunch. She’s completely naked. Mark crosses her arms over her chest and he pulls them away, hard, hurting her ( ... )
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Mark leaves her car in front of the Stanford Hospital emergency room with the keys inside. She honestly don’t care what happens to it; it’s not like she can’t afford another one. On the drive over, she planned out what she needs to say, and she rehearses it to herself as she walks up to the reception desk. I have been sexually assaulted and I need to see a doctor. But when the nurse looks up at her and says, “Can I help you?” Mark’s mouth opens and then freezes. She repeats her sentence to herself but her jaw and tongue won’t work to say it and her lungs won’t give her the air for it ( ... )
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