Re: [FILL] came missives from the king (1d/?)
anonymous
August 4 2011, 22:41:42 UTC
I.e. because of it Eduardo sticks around and Mark proceeds to show off mercilessly?
Love that you gave Mark a not!mind power, somehow having the awkward to arrogant genius have a power so physical and useless to his chosen field of interest is strangely endearing.
Re: [FILL] came missives from the king (1d/?)themisAugust 6 2011, 14:18:04 UTC
I love this! I love how it's funny in a wry and understated way (the character voices are particularly good), and how everything is part of a coherent universe already.
Re: [FILL] came missives from the king (2c/?)
anonymous
August 13 2011, 13:45:47 UTC
Whatever Eduardo's power is, he seems to be worried how his friends would react to it. That last scene with Mark, about being allowed to belong, seems to hold some significance for him. And that in itself is a bit worrisome. In a group as diverse as theirs, what could possibly be bad enough that he fears rejection?
Re: [FILL] came missives from the king (2c/?)themisAugust 13 2011, 19:35:20 UTC
This is already the kind of AU you hope for, I think - meaty and evocative, with strong resonances to the original scenario. I love watching the larger pattern emerge.
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Love that you gave Mark a not!mind power, somehow having the awkward to arrogant genius have a power so physical and useless to his chosen field of interest is strangely endearing.
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And Mark the shapeshifter which is just levels of possibly useful later, but downright hilarious.
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Looking forward to more!
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and ahahah I was kind a imagining him as like an evil!Aslan-type when he was a lion. and then the lion part reminded me of Andrew's hair... lolol
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