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nyxelestia November 25 2009, 01:50:08 UTC
A few seconds later, that something stopped.

Love that line, the implications and yet how you don't directly state what happens. :D

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tstaewsieh November 25 2009, 21:27:42 UTC
Aw thank you for such a great comment. It means a lot :)

I'm glad you liked my decision to imply it rather than actually state what happened. Wasn't sure whether it worked but apparently it did!

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blankmeridian November 25 2009, 04:25:59 UTC
Short but beautiful. And also, DDDDD: EMPHATIC SADFACE IS EMPHATIC.

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tstaewsieh November 25 2009, 21:29:52 UTC
Thank you for that lovely comment. AND IM SORRY ABOUT CAUSING THE SADFACE. Must write something to turn that frown upside down :) I'll think of something.

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tstaewsieh November 25 2009, 21:31:25 UTC
Your comments are always so wonderful! :)

I'm glad you managed to gain loads of emotions from something so short. I'll be sure to write more for you to cry/laugh at. Promise :)

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gyllenhaalic01 November 25 2009, 16:50:40 UTC
"You did manage to capture something."

AWESOME LINE.

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tstaewsieh November 25 2009, 21:35:35 UTC
How kind Kipps. You seem to enjoy calling my drabbles awesome. Well... two of them.

Anyway, I am hurt that you logged out...half an hour ago. You better return sometime soon else I shall beat you round the head with something hard and blunt because I care that much.

AND DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW HARD THIS BRACOLI FIC IS GETTING?! I may call it quits. I've added 3 lines today. Poor.

Long reply to a short comment... aren't I just wonderful.

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na_shao November 25 2009, 22:11:32 UTC
Fantastic, as always :) I've missed your little drabbles !

It was wonderfully sad but the “You did manage to capture something.” was so right.

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tstaewsieh November 25 2009, 22:39:22 UTC
Aw I've missed your comments! I'm sorry I haven't posted in a while. College work really catches up on you :P

I didn't really know how to be original with the prompt but I'm pleased it seemed to work.

I haven't heard from you in so long! It doesn't feel right! I should really post more often if it means I'll get to have a small talk with you :)

Thanks for another brilliant comment. It means a lot ♥

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na_shao November 26 2009, 20:52:34 UTC
Ahaha it's okay, I totally understand :) I had hell of a week last week with all my work from school, it was depressing. D:

You're so sweet ! But you don't have to post to talk with me, you know. My LJ is open to you and we can talk in private eheh. (but I love having conversations out there !)

You're welcome ♥ I'm glad you missed me. xD

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