Into the Darkness ~Chapter 2~

[tsu]

Please read the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason.

Title: Into the Darkness ~Chapter 2~
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Comments

[dragonalchemist]

*cries* Poor Ed!

And poor Roy for having that done. *emotears*

*clings to you* Let them escape! :O

*kowtows to your story*

[tsu]

Escape??? hmmmm, I could consider it, I suppose. No promises, though. *Grins*

[dragonalchemist]

Bwah! You are so evil!

. . .

I love it. >D

[tsu]

I can't think of a greater compliment. Your love makes me write. Really. Its all just for you.

Plus, I'm afraid that whatever creature that has control of this *thing* will hurt me if I stop.

[akari_hayashi]

Oww oww. Poor Ed... *wails and strangles you* Gosh, you are so evil... Sob...

[tsu]

Oooooo, strangling.... *looks thoughtful*

[l_envyxedward_l]

How evil and interesting XD;;

There were a few spelling errors here and there, but the storyline is very squick-y and definitely worth the time to read! Nice job ^^

[tsu]

Crap, did I leave spelling errors? Thats what I get for posting it when I'm half-awake. Meh. Word spell-check sucks.

But thanks. I'll have the next chapter done later today, I think.

[cryogenia]

O_O Wow, that hurts. I'm now desperate to know what happens to ED! omg, Ed...

The actual torture was brutal. Kudos to you for the tongue thing, I think that really sells it that they aren't playing around...poor Ed though, again. It isn't just that they're fucking him, they literally give him no way to refuse. Wow.

This is depraved. More?

[tsu]

depraved - Yeah, I'd say that describes it pretty well. Just posted 2 more chapters, I'm working on ch 5, but have ch.'s 6 and 7 almost done. It would be rather nice if this thing would write itself in order. *sigh*

[threeonetwo]

...Dear gods. That was...even I couldn't have done that, and I do some pretty bad things to my(original) characters when writing. That was...you are one skilled writer, yes. And man this was disturbing. Jesus christ on a pogo stick. -claps-

[tsu]

*laughs at mental image of Jesus on pogo stick*

Thank you for clappingness. It makes me feel slightly less dirty for writing this.