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tsu

Into the Darkness ~Chapter 4~

Mar 04, 2006 01:30

Please read the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason. Not entirely brinsafe, I think. Unless your brain works like mine. Then you're okay. Although you may be in need of stronger medication

Title: Into the Darkness ~Chapter 4~
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akari_hayashi March 4 2006, 09:45:42 UTC

Ahhh... You are still so evil~~ The front of the story is a relief, since there seems to be a little chance they will be saved. But to describe what happened... *sobz* But I am glad that Ed is still keeping his fighting spirit up when Roy is getting angst about everything.

tsu March 4 2006, 20:56:32 UTC

Yes... rescue... eventually. maybe. you never know. *grins*

cryogenia March 4 2006, 10:36:42 UTC

*_* Damn girl, this is just out and out debauchery - and I love it! God, I hope Hawkeye et. al. find them soon - poor Ed is going to be scarred for life ;_;

...assuming he's still alive...

Anyways, I love the idea that they're taking pictures on purpose and leaving them out for people to find. Freaking HARSH, but brilliant. What do their captors want? What are they trying to do? And I like how the knowledge that the other is in trouble is the only thing keeping them both from breaking...

tsu March 4 2006, 21:08:49 UTC

I don't think that I could get a greater compliment than your love. Seriously.

Yeah, as far as being scarred for life goes, they are both screwed. (bad pun, sorry. I envision them both being strong enough not to quickly, both of them having seem enough horrors in their lives to be rather tough. But with enough pressure, often things that are too hard can't bend enough, and they shatter. hmmmm....

l_envyxedward_l March 4 2006, 18:45:55 UTC

...Poor Ed....x.X When are Roy and Ed gonna get some alone time? XDD

tsu March 4 2006, 20:58:58 UTC

ummm, eventually. I promise. *evil grin*

threeonetwo March 5 2006, 06:36:29 UTC

Ok I was literally cringing through this and I think I almost threw up once. But I mean that in a good way, see, because it's near IMPOSSIBLE to get me to react as strongly as I have to this. It's been years since something has affected me this much, seriously. You are amazing. Just. Ok I'm going to keep reading, even though I'm going to get nightmares. yes.

tsu March 6 2006, 09:42:20 UTC

Don't throw up! It's bad for the keyboard!!!

parallax_view April 23 2007, 02:53:13 UTC

I think you characterized Hawkeye well. Alot of people just exaggerate her rough side, I hear. But you show the side of her which is weary of conflict, along with her more tender emotions, as well as the fact that she sometimes tries to *appear* strong when not feeling so at the time.

They're not gonna just leave him there with a continent up his ass and a semen coating, are they???