Again, horror, holy fuck. The first part didn't get to me so bad, but the latter half was really almost too much XD; But as far as torture and sadism goes, it CERTAINLY fits the bill. I really would almost rather see them die now than live, I have no idea how they could possibly recover XD;
I had to make it that brutal to justify Ch. 7. Which I'm having a hell of a time writing, and am slightly afraid of a lynch mob coming after me once I post it.
"Find some way to thank him for saving his life that day, while damning the man for forcing him to live."
That was a powerful line. This was a powerful chapter, overall. It certainly had me gushing with sympathy with the first two paragraphs. Everything after just about broke my heart. Ha ha, it looks odd to be complimenting something for breaking your heart, but stories that evoke emotion are good!
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Again, horror, holy fuck. The first part didn't get to me so bad, but the latter half was really almost too much XD; But as far as torture and sadism goes, it CERTAINLY fits the bill. I really would almost rather see them die now than live, I have no idea how they could possibly recover XD;
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That was a powerful line. This was a powerful chapter, overall. It certainly had me gushing with sympathy with the first two paragraphs. Everything after just about broke my heart. Ha ha, it looks odd to be complimenting something for breaking your heart, but stories that evoke emotion are good!
I definitely look forward to 7 and the epilogue.
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