Comments | tsu: Into the Darkness ~Chapter 7~

tsu

Into the Darkness ~Chapter 7~

Mar 05, 2006 15:23

Please read the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason. *nods emphatically*
This is (almost) the end. It's the last chapter, anyway. Next comes the Epilogue.

Title: Into the Darkness ~Chapter 7~
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maikan March 6 2006, 00:58:37 UTC

...O___O WHAT?!?

*flailspazdie*

tsu March 6 2006, 01:10:44 UTC

Sorry. If it makes you feel any better, I was crying while writing it. ummmmm, Here, have a cookie.

*gives cookie*

maikan March 6 2006, 01:26:31 UTC

Yay cookie X33

*nibbles on the cookie*

alchemistx March 6 2006, 01:14:43 UTC

OMG! (I'm not suppose to be on the internet right now, but I had to read this.) IS THAT THE END! Please tell me it was all a dream~

Come on, it CAN'T End like that. I mean, your the author and it CAN, but its sooo sad. ;__;

tsu March 6 2006, 01:17:16 UTC

Ummmm, well, there's an epilogue???

l_envyxedward_l March 6 2006, 01:15:42 UTC

.......WHYYYYYY~~~~ TOT

l_envyxedward_l March 6 2006, 01:18:45 UTC

Oh, and WRITE AN EPILOGUE!! MAKE ED COME BAAACK xDDD

tsu March 6 2006, 01:19:41 UTC

mwah ha ha ha You really didn't expect a happy ending, did you???

Details will be forthcoming soon. I'm finishing the epilogue. It'll make some sort of sense, but It'll still be sad.

l_envyxedward_l March 6 2006, 01:36:19 UTC

I always expect the endings to be sad, but that was so abrupt! @_@

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cryogenia March 6 2006, 01:45:48 UTC

...what?

Okay, so...if Ed dies...and we never find out what the point of this all was...it's really hard seeing what the point is :-/ Also having a hard time believing that Roy would really give in and fuck him, at least, not without trying to care for Ed first. O.o;

tsu March 6 2006, 01:57:52 UTC

*shrugs* The guy snapped. Can't really blame him, he was past his breaking point already.

I'll have the epilogue, which is really more of a mini-chapter then an omake, up in a bit. It basically explains the who's and why's and motivations of those running the show.

threeonetwo March 6 2006, 01:50:05 UTC

...I LOVE YOU AND I WANT TO MARRY YOU AND HAVE YOUR CHILDREN AND I WOULD NOT MIND IN THE SLIGHTEST IF YOU MOLESTED AND MURDERED ME IN A VERY VERY SICK TWISTED AND VIOLENT WAY.

You. Are now my inspiration for writing. Holy flying fuck. Just. JesusAllahBuddha. That was. Oh man. Just. Ok. Ok.

You managed to pull this off while keeping them in character but showing how broken they both ended up and just WOAH FREAKIN' WOAH.

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-worships-

That is all.

tsu March 6 2006, 02:11:25 UTC

Calm thyself, mine daughter.

Seriously, though, don't make me your writing model. You want a GOOD writer, go read sockren, or cryoginia, or velvet_mace, or sky_dark, or mistr3ssquickly, or inugrlrayn or so many others that could so easily write circles around me.

threeonetwo March 6 2006, 02:19:29 UTC

...Yes, they are good writers. I love sky_dark's fics. And velvet_mace. And the others. Yes. As well as astyzia(sp?) and kytyngurl(I think...er, sp?).

But none of them have ever made me -vomit- when reading, which I nearly did at the end there. Though you have spelling and grammar errors, as for emotion, you win. Seriously.

...Is it a bad thing that I was somewhat turned on by the necrophilia, while still being horribly sickened by it?

tsu March 6 2006, 03:26:46 UTC

lol, I know I need a beta, I have a hard time editing my own writing. But... I would feel kinda bad about subjecting an innocent beta to this... thing.

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