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Into the Darkness ~Epilogue~

Mar 05, 2006 18:35

Please read the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason.
What??? Is THIS the end, then? Yes, this really is the end. Finally.

Title: Into the Darkness ~Epilogue~
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threeonetwo March 6 2006, 04:06:50 UTC
...Oddly enough, I did not see that coming at ALL. Yet, even after this, I think think Envy is cool. I need to be shot. Seriously.

And really, I'm kind of happy Roy died, too. It would have been cruel to let him live, after all of that. And Al...poor Al. Not to mention poor Winry, losing both of her best friends in such a short amount of time, etc. I can't help but wonder what would happen if the public actually got a hold of the full report...-cringe-

Once again. Amazing writing. Not to mention depressing.

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tsu March 6 2006, 04:23:59 UTC
Nah, You don't need to be shot, I do. I'm so glad I'm done with this, you have no idea.

The whole Envy thing was actually something that I came up with as I was finishing the last few chapters. I was ready to leave it basically without the omake, putting some of the details I put in it up in the main part and making the epilogue a bit longer. But I figured that I needed SOMETHING to tie it together. Are the Homunculi a bit OOC? Yeah, probably. But I thought it kinda fit. A little forced, yeah, but it's done. Maybe I can go back to being somewhat sane now.

I am glad that you enjoyed it, though. :3

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tromkehra March 6 2006, 04:26:50 UTC
Poor Ed... Poor Roy! T-T!! *hugs Them both.* T-T!!!!!

This is just one of those stories that makes you wanna beat the living crap out of someone! Envy needs a good beating!

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tsu March 6 2006, 04:47:24 UTC
Well, I'm glad that I managed to stimulate strong emotion.

Although I think that I might be a bit afraid of someone who could read through this and not feel anything. *shudders*

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alchemistjunkie March 6 2006, 04:30:12 UTC
*shoots self*Why not? the other kewl people died.

I didn't see that ending coming at all...well except for the envy part.I was pretty sure about that. Great job.

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tsu March 6 2006, 05:03:44 UTC
No! No shooting selves!

*grumbles about unstable readers*

But Thank You.

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cryogenia March 6 2006, 06:43:42 UTC
Wow that was very...depressing... O.o;

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tsu March 6 2006, 07:35:49 UTC
Yeah. I just couldn't make it end all sunshine and daisies, though. Although it was tempting, I fell like it would have just... cheapened the fic, I guess.

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tsu March 6 2006, 10:18:52 UTC
Wait, YOU'RE calling MY writing depressing???

*head explodes*

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cryogenia March 6 2006, 15:15:20 UTC
XD Just calling a spade a spade f^^; I suppose the thing is - so when the whole point ends up being that they both got tortured to death, it sort of turns into pwp violence. Which is a legitimate genre, but certainly brutal.

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sexpress March 6 2006, 07:04:13 UTC
Detail, characterzation, writing - everything was so fabulous. This is officially one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Go you! :D

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tsu March 6 2006, 07:28:49 UTC
Wow... ummm... Thank You. *embarrassed smile*

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