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Into the Darkness ~Epilogue~

Mar 05, 2006 18:35

Please read the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason.
What??? Is THIS the end, then? Yes, this really is the end. Finally.

Title: Into the Darkness ~Epilogue~
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akari_hayashi March 6 2006, 17:22:57 UTC
Crap. I totally didn't expect that. O_o But it was good, really good. The plot was very engaging. And though I didn't want Roy and Ed to die, perhaps this is better for them. I normally don't read deathfics so this is an exception. Oh wait, you did warned me in that last warning, but I missed it. -_-\\\ But enough of all my babbling, wonderful fic this is still.

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tsu March 6 2006, 18:15:39 UTC
I figured death was kinder, would you want to live after going through all that? I know I wouldn't. It really wasn't fair of me not to warn you from the beginning, though. Sorry about that. I fixed my warnings so that noone else will be too suprised.

I'm glad you still enjoyed it, though.

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evil_wolfy March 6 2006, 20:19:00 UTC
Your writing is beautiful. The story was sad, interesting, and just about everything in between. At least Roy and Ed were able to be with each other, even for a brief period. i_i *sniffles*

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tsu March 7 2006, 00:13:57 UTC
*hands tissue*

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I really wasn't expecting the relatively positive reaction as I've received, at least from those that have commented; I rather expected people to be coming after me with torches. I'm rather glad that noone has, though. I'm not too fond of being torched.

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xx_lydia_xx March 7 2006, 05:14:18 UTC
Wow. Reading this made me want to turn on horribly morbid music and cry myself to sleep. But in a good way. Does that make any sense at all?

Nope. Didn't think so. But, again, wow. That was purely amazing.

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tsu March 7 2006, 06:40:13 UTC
Ummmmm, sure, 'Crying Yourself to Sleep While Listening to Morbid Music' is #14 on the Top 100 Things Perfectly Sane People Do. I think its right up there with 'Writing a Disturbingly Cruel Fanfiction About Your Favorite Characters/Pairing'.

Maybe I should be listening to the music, too. Scoot over, I'm staying with you tonight. And I'm bringing hot cocoa.

*Hands cocoa*

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madrona_8 March 8 2006, 01:42:05 UTC
Excuse my language but....God damn that was sick! And I happily read the whole thing.
I often wonder why I'm so drawn to these fics. Part of me really likes the idea of Roy & Ed getting tortured. I guess I just kept expecting some sort of comfort in the end. But NOOOOOO!
And poor AL. **sniffles**
But the Omake...now it all makes sense, because Envy is such a cruel fuck.

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tsu March 8 2006, 02:19:07 UTC
Lol, it was both fun and horrible to write, also. Good times.

It seems like just about every fic that I have read that starts out dark always gos soft. They always go free the end; or at least someone skips off into the sunshine and daises, or some great lesson is learned, or something along those lines. I couldn't do that to this.

Maybe I'll have the next thing I write be sappy or humorous or something. God knows I've got to get myself out of the funk that writing this monster has put me in. Although I do still need to finish the EvilArmor!Al fic that I'm working on. *sigh*

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sleepingsun March 8 2006, 04:59:24 UTC
I feel bad for waiting until now to comment :o

Wow. Just wow. I really loved this fic. Torture fics make me all warm & fuzzy inside. I guess that might be a bit...odd, but whatever. Very...surprising ending :o But I still think Envy is the PWNAGE. *shot*

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tsu March 8 2006, 05:10:56 UTC
You should feel bad. Very, very bad. Do you want me to spank you? *goes to get paddle*

Meh, I'm not all that happy with the ending, I was originally going to leave it hanging a bit, but then I realized that I had to pull something out of my ass or I might have people wanting to hurt me. *shrugs*

I'm glad that you liked it, though.

IMPORTANT: Getting warm and fuzzy at torture is one of the early warning signs of gingivitis.

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