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tsu

Into the Darkness ~Chapter 1~

Feb 20, 2006 01:18

Please read all the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason.
There is a strong possibility that this will seriously fuck with your brain and screw with your emotions. Really. You've been more than warned.

Title: Into the Darkness ~Chapter 1~
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Comments 17

dragonalchemist February 21 2006, 21:10:47 UTC

BWAH!! O_O

Pleeeeease, moooooore. *paws at you madly*

Don't die, Ed! We loves you! *clings*

tsu March 3 2006, 09:09:11 UTC

ooooh, I'm getting pawed at! I love paws! Don't worry, Ed can't die now... there's too much more I can do to him to let him off that easily.

wintry_dreams February 21 2006, 21:58:12 UTC

I have to agree with all of the other reviewers. This is a really good start for a story. I think you've gotten all of the basics down, and aren't hesitant to jump right into the action. :D

I have yet to read a dark FMA fic (of course, I haven't really read hardly ANY FMA fics), so I'm looking forward to this. ^^

ex_fuctrack February 22 2006, 00:49:57 UTC

Ooh~ I'm not really a fan of gore and major dark fics, but this has really caught my interest o__o I can't believe you left such a major cliffhanger *throttle* xD

You weren't joking ... golden_heretic February 22 2006, 19:41:00 UTC

Your not joking you when said Dark. ^^ very well written though, and the plot is really interesting. As I tell everyone Cliffhangers will be the death of me.

I had a feeling that once she disabled the thing that there was another way to trigger it. Poor Ed and Roy, I wonder what these people want and what they are reseaching.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^^

wow superxsapph February 22 2006, 23:48:04 UTC

wow, that was good. diffrent from most fics i'v read though...

Re: wow tsu March 3 2006, 21:48:00 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, my writing style is different, I guess. And I'm a research whore, I had to read every RoyxEd fic out there that I could get my hands on (literally, I've been part of the fandom for over a year now, I'm just now coming out of the shadows in which I have lurked) for ideas, and to at least make an ATTEMPT at something that I havn't seen that much of.