Shadow Boys 2: Part 4 Chapter 15

Oct 13, 2013 18:21

Title: Shadow Boys 2 : Midnight Mercury

Part Four: Quicksilver

Genre: Angst, Supernatural, Brotherhood, slight!Romance

Rating: PG - PG 15 (violence)

Fandom: Hey!Say!Jump with some others

Disclaimer: I own the plot, the OCs and the idea...the media, graphics and references to Johhnys is the reason I have this disclaimer.

Summary:

They risked ( Read more... )

sb2:part four, shadow boys 2

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suzaku20 October 13 2013, 14:10:27 UTC
Tsuchan I miss Ryosuke so much ;__;

Keeeiiito XD the awesome human being... Sometimes I couldn't follow the fighting but I got the picture of it.

The one who answered Sakura he isn't Kota right? Or is he?

I love your words here: This wasn’t who we were. This
wasn’t what we did. The fear of death, the smell of blood, the feel of pain… this wasn’t what we were trained for… prepared
for.
But then maybe… nobody
really is.

Thanks for update XD

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tsubasa_quill October 13 2013, 14:20:30 UTC
I know, he's in the next chapter don't worry :)

Gomen ne... I need to improve in writing fights :(

Yes he is :D Keito brought Sakura to the right place!

Really? :P They helped me start the chapter, otherwise I was stumped. Writing fight scenes is hard for me :/

thank you for reading hon!! <3

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suzaku20 October 13 2013, 14:33:33 UTC
nope! Your fighting scene is good :D it's me who lack vocabulary so it didn't let me to understand. *grin*

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tsubasa_quill October 13 2013, 16:57:21 UTC
I want you to enjoy the story as much as possible, you're one of my special readers <3 I need to work to make it better :) to be able to write simple worded but good fight scenes...yosh! gambarimassu!! And if i leave anything too hard to understand, because stuff doesn't always come out as I imagine it, plz let me know! :D

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ext_2030260 October 13 2013, 15:49:42 UTC
Owh.. Ryosuke.. did he just give in? What will happen to Kota? I wish there's light at the end of the tunnel.. [fingers crossed in hope] :)

Poor Keito.. he kind of overwork himself here... didn't he? Kind of a tug of war happening and did he just broke a limb or something? [i was like... 0.o]

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tsubasa_quill October 13 2013, 16:59:11 UTC
Kota's in luck cuz Keito and Sakura have reached him :)

Yes, he hurt himself reaaal bad :/

all the boys are going through a very tough time...

*feels bad*

XD

arigatou for reading!! sorry for the wait!!

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ext_2030260 October 14 2013, 14:47:30 UTC
go go Kota!! ganbatte ne(holding up my pom pom) :D

Sakura needs to find a way to help them..

Your updates kind of spikes up my imagination.. and believe me when I say it runs really wild sometimes... then it hits me, why not do something out of routine sometimes.. it doesn't hurt to try, does it?

--inspired mode>>>>>>>

--My pleasure tsu_chan. Dont mind waiting at all

**Keeping up the good fighting spirit for them all..

---Shot myself again for the continuous blabbering-- o.0

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tsubasa_quill October 14 2013, 14:53:02 UTC
haha you're adorable!! *picks up pom poms and joins u*

She will do her best definitely, most of my stories OC's are just supporting, Sakura is also supporting but she's the most involved OC I've ever written lol XD

Of course not!! <3 Imagination is the most amazing sensation humans possess I believe :P Glad I've done something to spike urs ;)

I promise the wait will be less this time :) I'm planning on sitting down and finishing both this is Akatsuki in this break! Well, I'll do my best of course :P

*looks up at her reply*

whoops XD

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ekadarmayanthi October 14 2013, 08:20:15 UTC
uwaaaaaahhh...
really curious now..

i am really want to see ryosuke now...i hope he is fine :D

Thanks for this Tsu-chan ^_^

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tsubasa_quill October 14 2013, 14:45:11 UTC
More about him in the coming chapters and yes he should be fine shouldn't he...who's gonna take care of Silver otherwise?? XD Thank you for reading!! :D

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hiyoshichii October 14 2013, 13:14:44 UTC
I so sorry tsu-chan for not commenting for so long and disappearing for so long. hontou ni gomen, tsu-chan.... Hontou hontou hontou ni gomenasai.......

I was so busy so I read the all the last 10 chapter in a row. I like this chapter because you played my favourite tune from tcr. I so sab that everyone's suffering though..... sob.... the song not helping making my mood any better but I still love it.

Sakura and Keito are awesome. Hang in there everyone.

Thanks for the great chapter. and sorry again for being late. and can't wait for your next chapter.

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tsubasa_quill October 14 2013, 14:48:32 UTC
eh there is no need to apologize dear!! I've been taking sooooo long to update too.. :)

It's one of my favs from tsubasa chron too :D I know...their first rescue attempt was less...painful?

I had a lot of fun with this pair, it was a very random match honestly but Keito's such a sweetie he'd go along well with everyone I think XD

Thanks for reading, really :) and I'm working on the next one, will have it up soon! :D

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