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Shadow Boys 2: Part 4 Chapter 23

Dec 13, 2013 04:03

Title: Shadow Boys 2 : Midnight Mercury

Part Four: Quicksilver

Genre: Angst, Supernatural, Brotherhood, slight!Romance

Rating: PG - PG 15 (violence)

Fandom: Hey!Say!Jump with some others

Disclaimer: I own the plot, the OCs and the idea...the media, graphics and references to Johhnys is the reason I have this disclaimer.

Summary:

They risked ( Read more... )

sb2:part four, shadow boys 2

Comments 16

litofroggy December 14 2013, 05:32:56 UTC

I caught up! I caught up! Haha~

Omg can't wait for what's next!! :D

tsubasa_quill December 15 2013, 00:38:05 UTC

Yay!! :)))

thank you for reading! Will update soon! ^.^

zeon_avalanthe December 18 2013, 08:16:33 UTC

And when Ryosuke was all tense and serious about explaining the other two boys about the plan, Keito just had to crack a joke there.. Poor boy, all he intended to do was lighten the mood up, but he seemed to annoyed the said boy instead.. Epic ( ... )

tsubasa_quill December 18 2013, 12:52:07 UTC

I didn't want to leave anything unspoken I guess :) Ryosuke's greatest weakness is his emotinal vulnerability... like I've mentioned somewhere a lot in the story is dramatization of what I see them as in real life...

His insecurity, sense of self-preservations, feelings for others seem like the only thing that can interfere with his resolve... when he's emotionally stable... he's indestructible XD

Funny, I'm a little like that too...

*clings to u*

zeon_avalanthe December 21 2013, 04:15:35 UTC

Indeed..
For what I've seen, in real life, Ryosuke is such a bundle of power which was restrained by his own doubts and fears.. Not once have I seen him preserved himself for the sake of others.. While in a way it was touching, it was also saddening..
Is beyond glad to know that he had started to fight off those walls little by little lately.. I believe that each member of JUMP had matured and is able to understand each others without an exchange of words.. Thus, further strengthen their bond so they can support each other in a way only they could..
Ah, such a nice story there.. *daydreaming*

And I could totally relate to that one.. One's story is like a mirror of it's writer's mind.. There's nothing weird in finding your own qualities in a character you created.. I know since I'm like that too~ :D

shamangirl187 December 27 2013, 22:02:44 UTC

the chapter wasnt boring at all!!!
ryosuke is facing off silver again *scared* i hope all goes well *fingers crossed*