Shadows...traces of you (original ending)

[tsubasa_quill]

Title: Shadow...traces of you
Genre: AU, Friendship, Horror, Angst, Crime and Investigation
Rating: PG-15
Type: One-Shot (with parts)
Disclaimer: This work is purely fiction, my characters are based on two of my favorite Idols and it has nothing to do with them other than that. The plot though, is mine and so "Copyright Protected". So is the poster

Comments

[zeon_avalanthe]

spot !!

[zeon_avalanthe]

true that this is much more angsty than the previous one..
but i can't help but smile, though sadly, reading daiki narrates everything there..
it was sweetly sad.. it makes u smile, but clenching ur heart at the same time.. it makes u cry, but makes u feel at ease as well..
SPLENDID TSU-CHAN !!!
*glomps*

[tsubasa_quill]

wow...hayai!

so...I didn't mess it up???

[zeon_avalanthe]

no, not at all~
XDD

[princessxnicola]

TTTTToTTTTT
this is really sad TAT
you made me cry again...

[princessxnicola]

and I love the music very much too! depressed... T^T

[tsubasa_quill]

I'm sorry ~

I'm pretty depressed too...

I should take a break from angst and try something lighter for a bit...I think...

The only light things in my library are my Yabu-thon prompts...should have more....*sighs*

Thank u for still reading though :)

[azukin_notsumi]

It's truly sad, there's no doubt about it... and shorter
but I think it is much better than the happy ending you posted before... How can I say it? it's much more emotive and realistic.

thanks so much!

[tsubasa_quill]

AND SADDER!

but I'm glad you liked it...

This is how it was supposed to originally end anyway...just wanted to post up an alternative just in case the angst gets too much for any reader...(and for myself XD)

[yingxsquare]

Oh? Another ending!
It's more angsty than the previous, but somehow, it goes more smoothly with the flow.

[tsubasa_quill]

Thank you...

This is the original ending actually...

the one i posted up before was the alternate, cause i couldn't decide on which ending to choose, i posted up both...

[yingxsquare]

Ahh, I see I see. That's why.
Hm, I think both endings are good. One is happy and the other is sad. The contrast of the feelings are quite extreme. It's really good :D

[tsubasa_quill]

glad u think so :)

[mr_rainyday]

....I wasn't sure at all if I wanted to read this, but somehow I'm glad I did, even though this was super sad and more emotional and kind fit the story better. Nghh almost cried ;~;
I feel good to know how this was supposed to end in the first place, too.

[tsubasa_quill]

Yeah...I was going to post this up first and then the other two part ending, but after the earthquake, i felt weird with it and held it back first...