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Still Waters: Part Two

Jun 04, 2013 23:42

Title: Scarlet Ribbons
Character: Suzuka
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst/Supernatural

Warning: Mentions of fights, mild intoxication, severe phobia, chara!death and blood.

Summary: Suzuka was a gifted university student with a long-running phobia for dolls. All is well until a prank out of jealousy goes horribly wrong, setting off a chain of events ( Read more... )

side story: still waters

Comments 7

shamangirl187 June 4 2013, 22:48:35 UTC

uwaaa...the name daiki gave me serious shivers in the beginning *shivers again*
and that was..*gulps* i dont know if i should feel sorry for her or not..
i can never forgive her for what she did to arioka and the others but here i feel sortof sorry for her..

tsubasa_quill June 20 2013, 16:00:36 UTC

sorry for the irresponsibly late reply!

well...the reason I put a backstory XD

I wanted to explain her attachment to Daiki, and lo and behold, a side story! XD

Thanks for reading this!! :)

zeon_avalanthe June 20 2013, 06:56:36 UTC

This was- FREAKING AWESOME !!! XD
Poor Daiki.. I can't helped myself from imagining this Nakamura Daiki as Arioka Daiki..
But now I knew why Suzuka was like that.. If I remember correctly, she had this attachment towards Daiki (the Arioka one) when they met.. Perhaps, this was the reason ?

And who is 'Papa' ? Is he, the professor ? O.O

Waiting for the others' stories~ Especially Silver's~ XD
Thanks for this, Tsu-chaaaan~

tsubasa_quill June 20 2013, 15:44:43 UTC

Really??

Well that was the idea, and yes, that is why she has this attachment to Daiki, because he reminds her of her old friend :)

Her papa (Hoshitsuki-san) works for the professor, he and his partner were assigned to find gifted people to join the ranks of Org Quicksilver, and ironically, they recruited Suzuka Hoshitsuki.

Silver's story will be up after the next chapter for a reason :D

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment hon!! <3

zeon_avalanthe July 25 2013, 03:03:12 UTC

Yepp! Really~ >,<

Ahh, that's why.. Now I see it..

I see..

Well, wll be waiting for Silver's story then~ Curious! >,<

You're welcome~ And, so sorry for the ultimate late reply.. *cries*

princessxnicola June 22 2013, 14:47:13 UTC

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!! I LOVE IT!
thank you for all the thoughts you put into Suzuka~ (*^-^*)

I kept imagining Arioka as Nakamura when I was reading (T-T)

sorry for being super late~!!
are there more to her side story??? O_O?

tsubasa_quill June 22 2013, 16:59:02 UTC

I'm glad you loved it!! I wanted to give Suzuka a solid backstory, I was a little worried but your comment is reassuring :P

I understand, the two do share similar traits in appearance, a little bit...thus Suzuka's attachment to the Arioka one!

There is one more chapter on how she meets Alice and Silver and Hayato, I will post that up soon, and she is also Daiki's main opponent in the main story, one that he has yet to learn to defeat.