I can;t tell you what I think because I'm crying too hard. i read copious amounts of fanfics and this is probably only the 2nd time one has made me legit cry even though I knew what was going to happen really early on.
this was really sweet and beautiful and I really loved the way you wrote Luhan and Jongin, even though they were side characters they were very real and i don;t even know what else to say because I am terrible at comments and still teary-eyed.
i didnt like the angst tho ;------; because its written so well that ;-----; ugh i hope im coherent enough for this u.u thank you for writing seho <3333333333333333333
YOU JERK I HADN'T PLANNED ON CRYING TWO NIGHTS IN A ROW OMFG
perfect joonmyun perfect sehunah congratulations on making this so believable it hurts and wow Jongin was spot on too. I really liked the structure of the story and how there was a sort of ~extended epilogue~ detailing what happened to sehun afterwards. (cough: APPROPRIATE TITLE seeing as how it started off with sehun alone and ended with sehun alone) I also really liked how Jongin was the only one unafraid of saying harsh words to Sehunah. It fit well with their age gap and their given histories with Joonmyun.
I cannot express to you how much I love love love quiet romances, and this was a perfectly quiet romance.
[edit] urghhh sorry posted this in reply to thursday sorry thursday
omg sorry, please have a box of tissues as an apology although it probably is not much.... eheheheh ;;
I wanted to do my best to make it as real as possible, I'm glad it turned out that way to the readers, bc I feel entirely differently >> thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it♥
this was sad and very lovely at the same time. the way you portrayed their characters, the way you described the progress of their relationship, the small details...everything was perfect. i had a feeling someone was going to die and the part where sehun sees joonmyun with the pills in his hand made everything clear. after that i knew for sure that he was going to die and i could feel the end coming, but i still wasn't prepared for the actual thing. oh my, fics rarely manage to make me cry but this... ;~; but it's okay though, it was absolutely worth it!! and you could ignore all the crap i wrote and just read this instead; this was absolutely perfect. thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us, really. ♥
I'd never ignore any comment, thank you so much for leaving one ♥ sorry for making you cry! have a tissue box and keep in mind Sehun will be okay, it's okay~♪
Thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥ I wanted to show every little step Sehun and Joonmyun took together and how they got close, I'm glad it was conveyed well enough. And yes, they did make out, LOL, but I'm no good at make-out/smut scenes so that had to be avoided T~T
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this was really sweet and beautiful and I really loved the way you wrote Luhan and Jongin, even though they were side characters they were very real and i don;t even know what else to say because I am terrible at comments and still teary-eyed.
I guess thank you will have to do.
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ugh i hope im coherent enough for this u.u
thank you for writing seho <3333333333333333333
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perfect joonmyun perfect sehunah congratulations on making this so believable it hurts and wow Jongin was spot on too. I really liked the structure of the story and how there was a sort of ~extended epilogue~ detailing what happened to sehun afterwards. (cough: APPROPRIATE TITLE seeing as how it started off with sehun alone and ended with sehun alone) I also really liked how Jongin was the only one unafraid of saying harsh words to Sehunah. It fit well with their age gap and their given histories with Joonmyun.
I cannot express to you how much I love love love quiet romances, and this was a perfectly quiet romance.
[edit] urghhh sorry posted this in reply to thursday sorry thursday
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I wanted to do my best to make it as real as possible, I'm glad it turned out that way to the readers, bc I feel entirely differently >> thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it♥
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and you could ignore all the crap i wrote and just read this instead; this was absolutely perfect. thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us, really. ♥
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