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[tsuki42]

First posted fic~! =D

Title: Shared Lips
Pairing: Pin (Akanishi Jin/Yamashita Tomohisa), ryopin friendship.
Genre: Angst, romance (fluff)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: kissing and mentions of sex~
Words: 5.857
Disclaimer: I don't own them neither does Johnny-san cause they are people! I only own the story~♥
Summary: It doesn't matter if it sounds selfish but he

Comments

[fullhouse_10]

♥♥♥
I loved it!!!
Hopefully everything ends well and thanks to Ryo, what will they do without him??? (^o^) I had doubt at the beginning :)
Pin are so cute together but Jin is so absent-minded: forgetting to say something as important as this !!
Thank you for this fic, it ends my day so well ♥♥
Hope you will write more as you seem to like Pi and he's my favourite :DD
(btw your icon is sooo cuuute~~ he looks so pretty on it!)

[tsuki42]

Haha, thanks! (/*3*)/

Yeah, I think I made Jin too absent-minded~ but it was necesary for the plot! xD

Thank you for such a lovely comment! It just made my day~♥

I love Pi! he is my fav too, so he will appear in a~all my fics I'm obviously biased xP

Younger!Pi was cute but grown up!Pi is smexier~ xD Like the one in your icon!

[fullhouse_10]

Don't worry, I'm really biased too when it comes to Pi ^^
so I'll look forward to your next work!
and yes definetely sexier *___*

[kyoko_godaikun]

I liked it very much. But I was really half expecting it to turn into a threesome, what with Ryo loving both of them too. I mean, Yamapi did say he loved both of them too.

So... perhaps you could do a sequel? All three of them could have a happy ever after.

[tsuki42]

Thanks!♥

I wanted a threesome too! xD but I felt like it wouldn't completely fit~ and the fic was already like 10 pages longer than I expected it xD

I may try and write a sequel if you want~ i have already started a threesome (pwp)fic with them xD I'm 3/4 done! it's not a sequel, but would that be enough anyway~? ~(*3*)~ Or do you want a fluffy sequel? I'm definitely not against it! =D

[kyoko_godaikun]

Well, I didn't mean just sex. lol I meant that since they all three loved each other, they should be with each other, as a commited triad. esp since Pi didn't seem to mind sharing Jin with Ryo. Perhaps I'm a little too open minded :) But after reading your story, I could see it happening! :)

[tsuki42]

You are not too open minded it's just I'm too dirty minded~ xD

So, it's a fluffy sequel?! You order I write! ;P

[tsuki42]

Thanks so much!♥ \(*3*)/

Ninja!Ryo was so much fun to write~ xD I didn't even have it planned that way! He ninja-ed into my mind as I was writing it!

Really~? I was afraid they would seem too... dummy xD but I like them better that way~

Thanks you for commenting! I'm really, really glad u liked it!♥ =D

[miyavi_382]

Really cute!!
First time reading this pairing, surprisingly, and you wrote it well~

[tsuki42]

Thanks a lot!♥

First time?! Then I'm re~ally glad you liked my fic! cause i would totally feel guilty of you not liking pin xD

btw, i like your icon! Pi has a nice smile in that one~

[yamapiislove]

Awe, this was adorable ♥
It's pretty good for a person who's posting for the first time.
There aren't many mistakes but there are a few tense errors here and there. I'm sure you'll get better in time (:
And I loved the KoyaTego part XD
That was hilarious.
Good job :D

[tsuki42]

Thanks!♥
Haha, yeah, I'm pretty bad at tenses~ xD sometimes it totally confuses me! cause in english I have to uses tenses that in my lenguage i almost don't use at all ~(*3*)~ Hopefully I'll get better~ or microsoft Word will improve and correct my tense errors for me xDD
Really glad you like it! d(^-^)
Thanks for the comment~♥