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tsuki_bug

50 Word Excerpt #3

Mar 06, 2009 00:56

Week 3

No Contest

I felt his gaze as I unwrapped the crinkling foil, his look longing, wanting. His eyes followed as I took a bite of the decadent delight.

But a chaste, smudgy kiss was all I was willing to share. After all, since it’s better than sex, what more do I need?

Edit (1:11 am, March 7th): Just a small edit to the excerpt.

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Comments 14

lilzazu March 6 2009, 06:28:37 UTC

haha just a chaste kiss? =)

tsuki_bug March 7 2009, 20:58:47 UTC

"My precious chocolateeee!" cries the narrator. = )

stripedpetunia March 6 2009, 07:12:37 UTC

Bahaha, yes.

tsuki_bug March 7 2009, 21:01:16 UTC

*grins*

anonymous March 6 2009, 07:36:32 UTC

WOOHOO! S-M-R-T!

tsuki_bug March 7 2009, 21:00:09 UTC

Hmm, I haven't had Smarties in a while...

sharona1x2 March 6 2009, 09:46:24 UTC

A chocolate flavored kiss has to be the best of both worlds. ^_^

tsuki_bug March 7 2009, 21:02:07 UTC

Heehee, I was thinking that too, as the alternate ending.

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tsuki_bug March 7 2009, 21:03:58 UTC

Gasp, you have? (How long is Lent? I always forget...)

We'll have to have tea instead of hot chocolate then = )

Aww, thanks!

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tsuki_bug March 13 2009, 01:53:24 UTC

Heehee, yay, tea-date!!! My problem with weekdays is that by the time I get home, it'll be quite late for you. Unless you stay up into the early hours, lol. So I guess that makes weekends best. How are your weekend?