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tsukinobotan

Red vs Blue: A Start

Aug 12, 2007 01:18

Title: A Start
Series: Red vs Blue
Pairings: Grif/Simmons
Warnings: Slash, Language
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 840

Many, many thanks to jack_infinitude for being one of the best betas I've ever had!

( Put it in a memo. )

grif/simmons, slash, red vs blue, fanfiction

Comments 18

powder_trauma August 12 2007, 07:23:06 UTC

Hehe, "Kick me." That's the bomb.

This rules, really. >3 You really got their characters well. And the thought of Simmons getting in my face after making him irate truly frightens me. XD <3

tsukinobotan August 13 2007, 04:16:37 UTC

God dammit, Simmons does not have an anger control issue! ;-)

But yeah, Simmons yelling at you would be scary, for a normal person. Of course, I can also see Grif taking twisted pleasure in baiting Simmons as much as possible. Thanks, though, and I'm glad you liked it!

powder_trauma August 13 2007, 04:18:12 UTC

Oh, yes, yes he would.

Aa~ It's a compliment that you would call me "normal". :D

tsukinobotan August 14 2007, 02:56:46 UTC

;-) I'm glad you took it as a compliment and not an insult. Of course, no one can begin to approach Grif's level of dysfunction.

meiko_matsui August 12 2007, 08:24:04 UTC

Love on so many levels! <3 You nailed their personalities sooo well. Grif made me laugh out loud and giggle quite a few times.

tsukinobotan August 13 2007, 06:37:58 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm really glad that you thought it was funny, because I think it's really important to have an element of humor when writing stuff based on this series.

speechie42 August 12 2007, 09:45:14 UTC

I like how casual Simmons is after the kiss. Normally that would be waaaay OOC, but here it somehow works. Amazing! ^^

tsukinobotan August 13 2007, 06:55:36 UTC

I was really going for shock with Simmons there. Glad it worked. Now to work on something to follow it up cause I need to play with Simmons some more. ;-)

speechie42 August 13 2007, 07:06:59 UTC

Everybody needs to play with Simmons some more.

brookiki August 14 2007, 02:54:44 UTC

Now it can be Simmons's turn.

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aseret_kitsune August 12 2007, 11:32:59 UTC

So great.^^ You really got these guys in-character.

tsukinobotan August 13 2007, 06:56:06 UTC

Thanks! I really, really worry a lot about keeping them in character...especially on something like this.

catc10 August 12 2007, 22:33:41 UTC

Oh GOD. I can totally see Simmons just being like, "fuck it." and getting on with life. Late at night, though, he's going to be fretting about it like a little girl.
ME

tsukinobotan August 13 2007, 06:56:57 UTC

Bingo! ;-) Now to figure out how to write a good Simmons breakdown.